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A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

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A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

Post by Bela Kiss on Wed 07 Oct 2009, 10:29 pm

Maturity: The word 'hell' and these are rather dark and abhorring poems.
Fantasy: nope


Murder
Eyes as pale and all-seeing as winter's frost,
Wings as lithe and scathing as a hawk's,
Ears as tall and pointy as the mountains,
Tail as smooth and cunning as a rawhide whip
With claws like strips of bark
Teeth like chips of ice
The Black empty heart
Is like a cold moonless night.

Sick
Wicked hearts and twisted minds
The weary souls that live off lies
Murder that feeds off lives
Yet still
Nothing can defeat thine.

Night
I hope you die
When the sun goes down
You don't want to be alive
When I'm around.

Lie
I don't want to stay the same
When everything will change
What is there to say
To make it okay?
This isn't something one can verbalize
This is something one has to try
Although I don't want to lie
Who cares anyway
I'll just stay the same
Where have you been
What is this feeling
This isn't what I thought it would be
Feels like something's rotting inside me
I wish you were dead
I wouldn't mind at all
To watch your head fall
Is this what I will become
When I am nobody
Nothing
Can be this daunting
So what can I pray
to make it safe?
This isn't something
I can neutralize.

Monster
The edges are frayed
Beyond repair
Even the tiniest tear
Can unravel your soul
And unleash something
You didn't know
You can't control
The monster inside you
Wants to get to know you
Even though you thought you knew
Who you were
Guess you were wrong
You've been wrong before
Guess it's true
You're the monster
You're the beast
You can't stop yourself
You're from hell
You lie waiting
And they fell
Before you
Go back to where you came from
You can't live in the sun
You can't overcome
What you've become
You're a monster.
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Re: A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

Post by Dreamer on Thu 08 Oct 2009, 7:25 am

Wow, those are really good!!! Smug They are rather dark and depressing, but that's okay, I tend to write dark and depressing things too. Nod

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Re: A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

Post by Bela Kiss on Thu 08 Oct 2009, 5:01 pm

Danke! Very Happy
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Post by Dreamer on Thu 08 Oct 2009, 6:16 pm

De nada! ^^

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Re: A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

Post by Tolly12bells on Fri 09 Oct 2009, 9:03 pm

You mean "Bitte". I like them a lot as well. Very dark, and a bit frightening at times, but they show immense amounts of talent.

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Re: A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

Post by superdork11 on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 10:52 pm

yes, and as to Danke, Lauren, doesn't Dominic have a shirt that says that?
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 10:59 pm

Yeah, but I don't think he realizes what it means.

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Re: A collection of poems by Maddie/Sweety

Post by superdork11 on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 11:06 pm

i know! It is so random1
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