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*Unnamed for now* Poems by Tolly12Bells

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Post by Tolly12bells on Fri 09 Oct 2009, 11:17 pm

OK, I don't write poems a whole lot, but here's a couple. *shrugs*

Maturity: Erm, nothing
Fantasy: Nothing Either

It doesn't have a name right now, so... yeah.

He sat there,
Once-cheerful blue eyes
Glazed with tears
Staring at the floor.
Not speaking,
Not looking up,
Not caring.
On the oversized green steps
In the commons
Snack
Lunch
Recess
Every day.

She watched him,
Every day
Not knowing
How to help,
but knowing,
That she could make a difference.

"Chris?"
The voice was spoken
Softly
Tentatively
He showed no sign of noticing
She laid a hand on his shoulder

A tear trickled slowly out of his eye
Leaving a shining trail down his cheek,
But he didn't throw it off.

But she knew how he was feeling
After all
It wasn't easy, dealing with a divorce

"What?"
The soft voice startled her

"I'm so, so, sorry."
He turned his back,
Body wracking with sobs.
She stood and left,
Leaving him alone again,
In his solitary corner in the commons.

Alright. That's what I have right now. This is actually based off a true story. A poor kid in my grade (I think he might have a bit of depression) would sit for ages, just staring or crying. After a while he stopped eating, and I would talk to him. It actually made a difference after a while. He started eating and talking again, and we made really good friends. Back before he was better though, I wrote this, and for an English assignment a few weeks ago, I had to write a descriptive paragraph off the sentence "He felt depressed" I just added punctuation, and a few more adjectives to this.

Thanks for reading,
Lauren


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Post by Dreamer on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 8:35 am

Oh, that's really good! That's so sad that it's a true story, though. But good for you for helping him! ^^

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 1:47 pm

Yeah. Poor Chris... It really upsets me when other people are depressed like that, so I always have to do something. Smiley

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 1:48 pm

Smiley You're such a kind spirit, Lauren. xD

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 9:08 pm

*takes a deep, appreciative bow* Thank you. xD

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 9:26 pm

xD
You are very welcome, kind sir.
*psst... Nadine... she's a girl...*
RIGHT.
You are very welcome, kind ma'am. xD
Draco is so helpful. Silly

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 9:36 pm

Ooh, MINE! *tackles Draco* Haha...

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 9:44 pm

*pulls Draco away from Lauren* Buaahaa. He is MINE! At least for my birthday. xD

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 10 Oct 2009, 10:15 pm

Crapple. You did remember. xD Remember? "I need to make arrangements to give Nadine Draco for her birthday" xD

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Post by Dreamer on Sun 11 Oct 2009, 7:35 am

Oh crap! *forgets*

*ten seconds later*

WAAAIIIIT!! It's my birthday now... ^^ *pulls Draco back* MINE! >=D

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 11 Oct 2009, 4:28 pm

LOL! Happy birthday... I shall be waiting for your birthday to end, so I can reclaim Draco. Smug *Moonwalks mysteriously around the corner* xD Wow, good times, good times... Oh my gosh, I was just reading our conversation on WI, and laughing my head off! But look at this. This made me angryful:

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That was a VM in our convo. xP *is angry with MissGnomie* But ROFL! Remember when we were all PMing the mods? And then, somebody said something about sending a PM that broke all the rules. Like, written in blue and red alternating letters, caps lock, and using a period to separate a word that's not allowed,"HI MISSGNOMIE! I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THE NEW CREATIVE WRITING RULES SU.CK" And she went on, and then, another person's like,"That's awesome! And the best part is that it starts out "Hi MissGnomie!" I just remembered that and fell out of my chair. xD


UPDATE: LOL! Nadine, that was you! I'd forgotten. Eye Roll

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Post by Dreamer on Mon 12 Oct 2009, 6:35 pm

My birthday is officially over. *sniffles* *gives Draco back* xD

Ohmigosh, I love looking back at old convos... the funniest was on DYTM (GRRR MISSGNOMIE! Die a horrible grusome death! xD) and the DMFC. I swear, go look back at DMFC, and you will be ROFLing LMAOing to death. xD

xD Yeah, that was hilarious. Eye Roll

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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 12 Oct 2009, 7:32 pm

I know! Especially pages 84-90 in the DMFC! "And what did Draco think of the scenes that involved him?" "He was like,'I'm so hot, right?' While stuffing his face with popcorn. And Edarlitrix was like, 'EW! Greasy fingers!'" Hahahaha!

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Post by Dreamer on Mon 12 Oct 2009, 9:43 pm

xD Gotta love Maddie.
Gotta love all of us, really. xD

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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 12 Oct 2009, 10:48 pm

So true. xD

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Post by Dreamer on Tue 13 Oct 2009, 7:35 am

Lol we're crazy and goofy and random and weird and draco-obsessed and awesome to the extreme. How could you not love us? *wide, innocent puppy eyes* xD

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Post by Tolly12bells on Wed 14 Oct 2009, 9:39 pm

Hahaha, I can think of a few people who wouldn't agree with that. Eye Roll But I haven't cared about that for about 3 years. xD

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Post by Dreamer on Wed 14 Oct 2009, 9:54 pm

Ahha! Yeah, I can think of alot of people who wouldn't agree.
Weirdly enough, apparently alot of people don't like me for no reason! It's so weird. People who really know me like me, though, except for b****es like Kara. xD

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Post by Tolly12bells on Wed 14 Oct 2009, 10:38 pm

Me as well. Smiley I gave up on letting that bother me though, because people who do like me, outnumber the people who don't.

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Post by Dreamer on Thu 15 Oct 2009, 7:27 am

Yup, same here Smiley

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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 15 Oct 2009, 9:13 pm

xD So...

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Post by superdork11 on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 10:41 pm

HI! Lauren, remember,
"If someone says no to you at the dance you start dancing around the room with your invisible boyfriend." "Or your fictional one," "Draco Malfoy!" hehehe
*tackles Lauren and Nadine and ends up in the bottom of a dog pile with Draco on top.* sorry , that was random. I felt so bad for Chris last year. It made me sad to see him... Crying or Very sad
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 10:48 pm

Of course I do! xD I think I've mentioned that somewhere on here. xD

Er, yeah, just a bit random Eileen. *rolls eyes*

I know, I used to lay in bed up way late just feeling bad for him. And then he totally killed Fuzzy and Ryan (Ry-Ry Ryan. Not Ryan **** the science lodge. xD) on the bus. The teased him, and he flung himself across the aisle and totally started beating them up. I felt horrible...

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Post by superdork11 on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 10:50 pm

yeah, i felt so bad, at least it was the science lodge in stead of (does he have a nick anme? Other than Ry- Ry focourse) I shouldn't have said that.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 07 Nov 2009, 11:00 pm

No! He beat up on RyRy. xD Not science lodge. xD

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