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From Hell!

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From Hell!

Post by Bela Kiss on Mon 16 Nov 2009, 1:53 pm

Fantasy: NONON
Maturity: Totally. Blood.

This is like a crazy Jack the Ripper thing.

From Hell

You cannot see
Everything is stained to be
Red, crimson, violet
O! Deny it, as you say
Don’t forget your place
No, no
Don’t forget your place.
Every race is gone again
You are without friends
But you’re
Bleeding overkill
So surreal
Faster faster, slower still
Your fingernails are painted amateur
With the red
With the soul
You taste metal in your mouth
You know now
Metallic overkill
End of hell
Or is it beginning?
Running off and on!
Slower is the music
Your song
Of the dead
The blood
Is always here
Always fear, always fear
Every tear
Is of blood
God above
Is punishing you
For what you do
The little cut you made today
Is spilling like a tidal wave
Everything is overrun
Internally
Shot like a gun
You’re over empty
Surrounded
By the guilty
Everything
That sang
That you sing
Is now just blood
Now just blood
Now bloodlust
Feel the heat
Feel the pain
Sticky sweet
All insane!
Hold the blade
For the sane
Every glitter
Every gain
Always lost
But the cost
You feel
So surreal
Overkill
What is this
What can this
Be now that we
See what you are now
Overcome
Overkill
Hold the sharp
Hold the life
Choice is yours
What do you
Have to lose?
Place it gently
Don’t let go
Empty now
Don’t slow
Faster Still
Slower now
Overkill
See it now
You hold life
What was strife
In your rage
In your hate
You defy
You dissuade
You comply
Place it down
Gently now
Gently now
Go again
And again
Never end
Never end
Overkill
So surreal
Slower now
Faster still
There the heart!
Overkill
Take it now
Take it how?
Place the silver
Place the glitter
On the stone
Colder old
Giving in
Now you know
Don’t let go
Take it yours!
Gently
Set it down
You’re not finished
But the end is near
Place the metal
On her hair
Carve the dead
The speaking
The THRILL!
You feel
So surreal
Emptier
You’re addicted
It’s like a drug
But it’s so much better
Here forever
Macabre
End of never!
But this is
Overkill
They don’t know
So surreal
Everything
Never seemed
So blurry
Masked
And murky
But it is!
What it is!
Something no one
Else
Will live to see, to feel!
She’s no more
She’s gone
But for sure
There’s more to be done
Place again
Metal bleeds
Like a long lost friend
Deeper still
Feel the feel
And the tear
You swear
Nothing
Can be
So endlessly
Maddening
The beast!
The freak!
The thing
The thing
The thing!
You go way to deep
In your disapprobation
But don’t fret
Still not yet
Cut the cord
Remove now
Overkill
Place it down
Gently, now
You feel
The THRILL!
See the rubies
Dripping
Still again
Nobody
Notices somebody
Missing
Number six
Is the twist
Last
Last
One more time!
And the cycle
Will be complete!
Now you’re mine!
Overkill
So surreal
Take again
Silver feel
Cruelly sheen
Lithe again
Terror reigns!
Laugh with mirth
Mirth of dead
Feel the rage!
Feel it scream!
Overkill
Under sworn
From Hell!
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 16 Nov 2009, 6:59 pm

Ooh... That's amazing, and very creepy... But it's still good.

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 16 Nov 2009, 7:17 pm

yeah, it is really good!
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Post by Dreamer on Sat 21 Nov 2009, 7:41 pm

WHOA. O.o That is really long... and really really good... you definitaly have a gift for poetry, Maddie. I mean, they're all really creepy.. but they're sooo good. Nod

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 22 Nov 2009, 9:24 am

yes. *agrees with Nadine*
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 22 Nov 2009, 12:39 pm

*Agrees with the above post* She definitely is VERY gifted in poetry. Nod

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Post by superdork11 on Tue 24 Nov 2009, 7:37 pm

yes *continues chain of agreing with the above post*
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Re: From Hell!

Post by Bela Kiss on Thu 26 Nov 2009, 3:24 pm

Danke peoples!
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