Assassin
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Assassin
by Bela Kiss Mon 16 Nov 2009, 2:59 pm
Fantasy: Like a rich bratty Prince
Maturity: Blood, gore, some sexuality (not literal)
Assassin
Beauty
Gems
Pretty shins
Drowning wine
A fun time
For the rich
For the glutton!
For the smug
Eat your mutton!
Feast your eyes on heaping platters
Forget the lives that are left in tatters
Gorge yourself on intimacy
Forget yourself,
You are always free!
To do as you wish
To play as you do
A fool
That is you!
Growing giddy
With each sip
Wine poisoned
With lust’s fine mist
You have no future!
Wine is spewing
Fountains
And fountains!
Golden lilacs
Scatter the marble
Liquid grapes
Drown your sorrow
Draped in velvet
So smooth
But you have all to lose
You fear the next
The next and the next
Who knows?
When the assassin will hit
He (Or she?) may be bowing (Or curtsying?) at your feet
Smothering your hand with well meant kisses
But deep inside them
Hate ensues
Filthy Prince!
You are not so divine!
You lay back down
With your lover
But on your pillow
Another
Another!
A beast!
A beast?
A worm!
A worm!
The worm of death
Nightshade’s breath
Wine and hallows
Stung on your temple!
By the worm!
The beast!
Another!
Blood ejects
Itself from your heart
You vomit your innards
Up on the floor
Your pores are filling
With buckets of crimson
Violet whispers fear in your censored
Your lover is frightened
But what shall you do?
Your assassin has struck
Death ensues.
Maturity: Blood, gore, some sexuality (not literal)
Assassin
Beauty
Gems
Pretty shins
Drowning wine
A fun time
For the rich
For the glutton!
For the smug
Eat your mutton!
Feast your eyes on heaping platters
Forget the lives that are left in tatters
Gorge yourself on intimacy
Forget yourself,
You are always free!
To do as you wish
To play as you do
A fool
That is you!
Growing giddy
With each sip
Wine poisoned
With lust’s fine mist
You have no future!
Wine is spewing
Fountains
And fountains!
Golden lilacs
Scatter the marble
Liquid grapes
Drown your sorrow
Draped in velvet
So smooth
But you have all to lose
You fear the next
The next and the next
Who knows?
When the assassin will hit
He (Or she?) may be bowing (Or curtsying?) at your feet
Smothering your hand with well meant kisses
But deep inside them
Hate ensues
Filthy Prince!
You are not so divine!
You lay back down
With your lover
But on your pillow
Another
Another!
A beast!
A beast?
A worm!
A worm!
The worm of death
Nightshade’s breath
Wine and hallows
Stung on your temple!
By the worm!
The beast!
Another!
Blood ejects
Itself from your heart
You vomit your innards
Up on the floor
Your pores are filling
With buckets of crimson
Violet whispers fear in your censored
Your lover is frightened
But what shall you do?
Your assassin has struck
Death ensues.
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Re: Assassin
by Tolly12bells Mon 16 Nov 2009, 7:01 pm
Nice... I liked the description "Golden Lilacs" Just paints a good picture. 
Very nice imagery in there.
Very nice imagery in there.
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Re: Assassin
by superdork11 Mon 16 Nov 2009, 7:20 pm
wow! That is really goooooooood!
Hehe! Laurne
foooooooood moooooooooooooving cooooooooking hehe! remember ryan, that was so random, but anyway, y9ur poem was really good
Hehe! Laurne
foooooooood moooooooooooooving cooooooooking hehe! remember ryan, that was so random, but anyway, y9ur poem was really good
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Re: Assassin
by Tolly12bells Mon 16 Nov 2009, 7:26 pm
Yes, I remember it, but er, you were in the other class. xD You never told me he wrote them. 
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Re: Assassin
by Dreamer Sat 21 Nov 2009, 7:36 pm
Oooh, that's really good, Maddie! O.o Like Lauren said, it really does paint a picture.
Hey, Eileen... erm, yes, just so you know, you don't have to start a seperate conversation every time you comment on a thread. You can just say it's good and move on, no need to bring up random memories in every post. Unless somehow it pertains to the convo... yeah. Oh, now I feel so lame telling you to stay on topic.. blah.
Hey, Eileen... erm, yes, just so you know, you don't have to start a seperate conversation every time you comment on a thread. You can just say it's good and move on, no need to bring up random memories in every post. Unless somehow it pertains to the convo... yeah. Oh, now I feel so lame telling you to stay on topic.. blah.
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Re: Assassin
by Dreamer Sun 22 Nov 2009, 11:23 am
Lol, sorry. It just seems like instead of leaving a nice comment on something, if you see Lauren's commented also you automatically bring up something random that has nothing to do with the thing. Honestly, I have no problem with getting off topic, but it seems like that's all you want to do. And, my friend, we have the Off-Topic Chat section for that.
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