*Unnamed for now* Poems by Tolly12Bells
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*Unnamed for now* Poems by Tolly12Bells
OK, I don't write poems a whole lot, but here's a couple. *shrugs*
Maturity: Erm, nothing
Fantasy: Nothing Either
It doesn't have a name right now, so... yeah.
He sat there,
Once-cheerful blue eyes
Glazed with tears
Staring at the floor.
Not speaking,
Not looking up,
Not caring.
On the oversized green steps
In the commons
Snack
Lunch
Recess
Every day.
She watched him,
Every day
Not knowing
How to help,
but knowing,
That she could make a difference.
"Chris?"
The voice was spoken
Softly
Tentatively
He showed no sign of noticing
She laid a hand on his shoulder
A tear trickled slowly out of his eye
Leaving a shining trail down his cheek,
But he didn't throw it off.
But she knew how he was feeling
After all
It wasn't easy, dealing with a divorce
"What?"
The soft voice startled her
"I'm so, so, sorry."
He turned his back,
Body wracking with sobs.
She stood and left,
Leaving him alone again,
In his solitary corner in the commons.
Alright. That's what I have right now. This is actually based off a true story. A poor kid in my grade (I think he might have a bit of depression) would sit for ages, just staring or crying. After a while he stopped eating, and I would talk to him. It actually made a difference after a while. He started eating and talking again, and we made really good friends. Back before he was better though, I wrote this, and for an English assignment a few weeks ago, I had to write a descriptive paragraph off the sentence "He felt depressed" I just added punctuation, and a few more adjectives to this.
Thanks for reading,
Lauren
Maturity: Erm, nothing
Fantasy: Nothing Either
It doesn't have a name right now, so... yeah.
He sat there,
Once-cheerful blue eyes
Glazed with tears
Staring at the floor.
Not speaking,
Not looking up,
Not caring.
On the oversized green steps
In the commons
Snack
Lunch
Recess
Every day.
She watched him,
Every day
Not knowing
How to help,
but knowing,
That she could make a difference.
"Chris?"
The voice was spoken
Softly
Tentatively
He showed no sign of noticing
She laid a hand on his shoulder
A tear trickled slowly out of his eye
Leaving a shining trail down his cheek,
But he didn't throw it off.
But she knew how he was feeling
After all
It wasn't easy, dealing with a divorce
"What?"
The soft voice startled her
"I'm so, so, sorry."
He turned his back,
Body wracking with sobs.
She stood and left,
Leaving him alone again,
In his solitary corner in the commons.
Alright. That's what I have right now. This is actually based off a true story. A poor kid in my grade (I think he might have a bit of depression) would sit for ages, just staring or crying. After a while he stopped eating, and I would talk to him. It actually made a difference after a while. He started eating and talking again, and we made really good friends. Back before he was better though, I wrote this, and for an English assignment a few weeks ago, I had to write a descriptive paragraph off the sentence "He felt depressed" I just added punctuation, and a few more adjectives to this.
Thanks for reading,
Lauren
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Oh, that's really good! That's so sad that it's a true story, though. But good for you for helping him! ^^
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Yeah. Poor Chris... It really upsets me when other people are depressed like that, so I always have to do something.
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*takes a deep, appreciative bow* Thank you. xD
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xD
You are very welcome, kind sir.
*psst... Nadine... she's a girl...*
RIGHT.
You are very welcome, kind ma'am. xD
Draco is so helpful.
You are very welcome, kind sir.
*psst... Nadine... she's a girl...*
RIGHT.
You are very welcome, kind ma'am. xD
Draco is so helpful.
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Ooh, MINE! *tackles Draco* Haha...
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*pulls Draco away from Lauren* Buaahaa. He is MINE! At least for my birthday. xD
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Crapple. You did remember. xD Remember? "I need to make arrangements to give Nadine Draco for her birthday" xD
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Oh crap! *forgets*
*ten seconds later*
WAAAIIIIT!! It's my birthday now... ^^ *pulls Draco back* MINE! >=D
xD
*ten seconds later*
WAAAIIIIT!! It's my birthday now... ^^ *pulls Draco back* MINE! >=D
xD
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LOL! Happy birthday... I shall be waiting for your birthday to end, so I can reclaim Draco. *Moonwalks mysteriously around the corner* xD Wow, good times, good times... Oh my gosh, I was just reading our conversation on WI, and laughing my head off! But look at this. This made me angryful:
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08-29-2009 06:40 PM - permalinkLolo12
That was a VM in our convo. xP *is angry with MissGnomie* But ROFL! Remember when we were all PMing the mods? And then, somebody said something about sending a PM that broke all the rules. Like, written in blue and red alternating letters, caps lock, and using a period to separate a word that's not allowed,"HI MISSGNOMIE! I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THE NEW CREATIVE WRITING RULES SU.CK" And she went on, and then, another person's like,"That's awesome! And the best part is that it starts out "Hi MissGnomie!" I just remembered that and fell out of my chair. xD
UPDATE: LOL! Nadine, that was you! I'd forgotten.
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That was a VM in our convo. xP *is angry with MissGnomie* But ROFL! Remember when we were all PMing the mods? And then, somebody said something about sending a PM that broke all the rules. Like, written in blue and red alternating letters, caps lock, and using a period to separate a word that's not allowed,"HI MISSGNOMIE! I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THE NEW CREATIVE WRITING RULES SU.CK" And she went on, and then, another person's like,"That's awesome! And the best part is that it starts out "Hi MissGnomie!" I just remembered that and fell out of my chair. xD
UPDATE: LOL! Nadine, that was you! I'd forgotten.
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My birthday is officially over. *sniffles* *gives Draco back* xD
Ohmigosh, I love looking back at old convos... the funniest was on DYTM (GRRR MISSGNOMIE! Die a horrible grusome death! xD) and the DMFC. I swear, go look back at DMFC, and you will be ROFLing LMAOing to death. xD
xD Yeah, that was hilarious.
Ohmigosh, I love looking back at old convos... the funniest was on DYTM (GRRR MISSGNOMIE! Die a horrible grusome death! xD) and the DMFC. I swear, go look back at DMFC, and you will be ROFLing LMAOing to death. xD
xD Yeah, that was hilarious.
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I know! Especially pages 84-90 in the DMFC! "And what did Draco think of the scenes that involved him?" "He was like,'I'm so hot, right?' While stuffing his face with popcorn. And Edarlitrix was like, 'EW! Greasy fingers!'" Hahahaha!
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So true. xD
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Lol we're crazy and goofy and random and weird and draco-obsessed and awesome to the extreme. How could you not love us? *wide, innocent puppy eyes* xD
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Hahaha, I can think of a few people who wouldn't agree with that. But I haven't cared about that for about 3 years. xD
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Ahha! Yeah, I can think of alot of people who wouldn't agree.
Weirdly enough, apparently alot of people don't like me for no reason! It's so weird. People who really know me like me, though, except for b****es like Kara. xD
Weirdly enough, apparently alot of people don't like me for no reason! It's so weird. People who really know me like me, though, except for b****es like Kara. xD
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Me as well. I gave up on letting that bother me though, because people who do like me, outnumber the people who don't.
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HI! Lauren, remember,
"If someone says no to you at the dance you start dancing around the room with your invisible boyfriend." "Or your fictional one," "Draco Malfoy!" hehehe
*tackles Lauren and Nadine and ends up in the bottom of a dog pile with Draco on top.* sorry , that was random. I felt so bad for Chris last year. It made me sad to see him...
"If someone says no to you at the dance you start dancing around the room with your invisible boyfriend." "Or your fictional one," "Draco Malfoy!" hehehe
*tackles Lauren and Nadine and ends up in the bottom of a dog pile with Draco on top.* sorry , that was random. I felt so bad for Chris last year. It made me sad to see him...
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Of course I do! xD I think I've mentioned that somewhere on here. xD
Er, yeah, just a bit random Eileen. *rolls eyes*
I know, I used to lay in bed up way late just feeling bad for him. And then he totally killed Fuzzy and Ryan (Ry-Ry Ryan. Not Ryan **** the science lodge. xD) on the bus. The teased him, and he flung himself across the aisle and totally started beating them up. I felt horrible...
Er, yeah, just a bit random Eileen. *rolls eyes*
I know, I used to lay in bed up way late just feeling bad for him. And then he totally killed Fuzzy and Ryan (Ry-Ry Ryan. Not Ryan **** the science lodge. xD) on the bus. The teased him, and he flung himself across the aisle and totally started beating them up. I felt horrible...
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yeah, i felt so bad, at least it was the science lodge in stead of (does he have a nick anme? Other than Ry- Ry focourse) I shouldn't have said that.
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No! He beat up on RyRy. xD Not science lodge. xD
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