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Post by Music Is Love on Sun 29 Nov 2009, 12:46 am

And she makes it through another day...
Wishing the pain would just go away...
Praying that they didn't have to part...
Day by day, she hides her broken heart...


Hearts Emotion
If my heart could cry, it would cry until it stopped beating..
If my heart could smile, it would smile at you...
If my heart could feel, it would feel broken....
If my heart could love only one person, it would love you...

~Broken~
Darkness surrounds me,
This pain i feel astounds me.
I wish that someone was there,
Someone that would really care.
And even though I want to cry,
I hold my head up high.
This pain is so strong,
And its gone on far too long.
I thought that I could make it,
And though I surely tried.
My heart is just to fragile,
Its all broken up inside.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I Can't Breathe
My greatest fear was losing you
And that you are gone
My heart just feels so empty
Theres nothing inside at all
And even though I'm broken
Somehow I make it through
But I'm not sure how much longer
'Cause I can't breathe without you...

Insane
There's no more tears
There's no more pain
You took my life
you went insane.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I fell to my knees,
as I watched her walk away,
You walk up and say,
"Are you okay?"
I look at you and smile,
As tears run down my face
And ever since you came along,
My heart has no empty space.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 29 Nov 2009, 1:33 pm

Ooh, I love the second one... I love you

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Post by Amber on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 10:57 am

There both Awesome!!!! ^.^

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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 3:43 pm

Thanks! I've always thought i was better at poetry than story writing.
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Post by Dreamer on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 4:44 pm

I like them both! ^^ Especially the first one, it's very well written.
I struggle with rhyming. Razz That's why I'm so proud of myself when I write a song or rhyming poem. Eye Roll

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 5:42 pm

I have rhyming issues too... Eye Roll You have to have mad skill to write a good rhyming poem. Mine are always just epic fails. xD

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 5:49 pm

Mine are sometimes okay. Sometimes they're dreadful, though. Eye Roll

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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 6:02 pm

It took me forever to write those two. I only write good poetry when I'm depressed. Which is weird, cuz I can't write anything else when I'm depressed, it always sound boring.

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 6:09 pm

Yeah, I find it easiest to write poetry when I'm depressed or upset or angry. Most poetry is emotion-based, so it's easiest to write it when emotions are running high.

OHMYGOODNESS. I love the new poem! ^^ I especially love the last bit.

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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 6:18 pm

Yeah, I find that if I'm happy (which is very rare) I can't write poems to save my life. But, I write really good chappies in my story. And then the other ay around when I'm depressed.

Tankinz! I wrote that at school a couple days ago, and I just remembered it.
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Post by Dreamer on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 6:21 pm

Aw! That's sad that you're rarely happy. Sad

That's awesome. (:

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 05 Dec 2009, 10:15 pm

Aw, it's too bad that you're rarely happy! I don't think I'd be able to make it!

Oh... I cried when I read that last poem. Emotions running high...

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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 1:26 pm

Some new poems up...
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 1:32 pm

Those are sad, Tizzle...

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 2:37 pm

Aw, those are sad...

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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 3:48 pm

Neutral well, I was depressed when I wrote them...
Most of my poetry is sad anyway
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Post by Dreamer on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 4:07 pm

Same here, honestly. My poems are usually pretty depressing. Eye Roll

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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 4:17 pm

Yeah. I don't think I've ever written a happy poem.
When I'm depressed, i always write. It makes me feel better. Smile
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Post by Dreamer on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 5:04 pm

I write happy poems, but usually I write sad poems.
Most of my uncompleted stories are tragic because I get all upset, start writing a depressing, scary, and tragic prologue to a story, and then come back to it when I'm happy and go, wow, I was really depressed. And then abandon it. xP

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 5:31 pm

I rather enjoy writing sad parts in my story, even if it makes me cry, but it's a good skill to have for sure.

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:04 pm

It certainly is. If it makes you sad, it'll make the reader sad, and that is the desired effect. And if it makes you happy, it'll make the reader happy, and that's also a desired effect. (:

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:07 pm

Yep. But it's not fun to be depressed from your own writing, but, it's a good thing. Yes.

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:10 pm

Yeah. Sort of confusing, but yes. Eye Roll

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:11 pm

Sorry, half of the things I say make no sense anymore. xD

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:19 pm

Same here. Eye Roll Everything is just so dang COMPLICATED. xP

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