Wish for a Fairy Tale

Alright, a quick explanation: I thought it would be cool to use popular reference points, such as a small town girl and city boy, etc, to write a poem. Here's my best shot.

Yes, I am a small town girl
Living here, in my lonely world
Wishing life could work out
Just like a song
So that I
Don't Stop Believin'
And I'm waiting for you,
City Boy,
To get on a midnight train
So we can live out
Our happily ever after.
Yes, Prince Charming,
I want my life
To turn out like a fairy tale,
But without, "The End"
Because I never really want
My happily ever after dream
To come to a close
I want it to
Go on and on and on and on...

WIN!! That's great Lauren! (:

Wow, nice! That's awesome! I like the end, it goes on and on and on and on!

Thanks you guys. I don't know if it helps that I wrote it at 11:30 or something. xD

Nice, I always write better in the morning/evening.

Evening for me.

Nice.

I write my best... whenever. When I'm inspired.

For me, nighttime inspires me most. The stars, the moon, the darkness, the peace. I dunno. I do really well at night. And not, like, 8:30. I mean NIGHT NIGHT: As in 12:30-2:30.

Yeah, nice.... night night.... wow Lauren.

Sorry. I got used to repeating words for emphasis. After last night... (I said like-like a lot...) So night night was sorta the first thing that came to mind.

Okay, I'm not complaining. I just thought it was funny.

Haha, I know. I reread it, and it sounded pretty funny too, but not just night, NIGHT-night. xD

I know! Wow.