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I Hear Feet Approaching

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I Hear Feet Approaching

Post by Hyper on Wed 24 Feb 2010, 10:09 am

I hear feet approaching,
On this gravel path,
I'll have to think real quickly,
I'll have to do the math.
If I start to run,
How fast will it be?
If I start to run,
Could it still catch me?
I take a chance,
I start to run,
It's faster than I thought,
I took a chance,
But now it's done,
It's over and I'm caught.

I would love some C+C :]
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Re: I Hear Feet Approaching

Post by Tolly12bells on Wed 24 Feb 2010, 6:44 pm

Oh wow. I like that, and now I'm a little bit paranoid. O.o Very good though.

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Post by Dreamer on Wed 24 Feb 2010, 8:05 pm

Wow, that's really good! I wouldn't be able to think of rhymes likes that. Eye Roll *applause*

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Post by Tolly12bells on Wed 24 Feb 2010, 8:06 pm

I agree. It's like you're a mini Shakespeare. O.o I'm jealous. xD

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Re: I Hear Feet Approaching

Post by superdork11 on Wed 24 Feb 2010, 11:23 pm

yeah! You are really good! Yeha!!!!!!!!!! Sorry, typo! Lol, bob! Yeah! good! sorry, spazz!
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Re: I Hear Feet Approaching

Post by Hyper on Thu 25 Feb 2010, 7:51 am

Thank you very much!
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Re: I Hear Feet Approaching

Post by Music Is Love on Fri 26 Feb 2010, 8:19 pm

Wow! Thats really good! Smile
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Post by superdork11 on Sat 27 Feb 2010, 8:46 am

yeah.
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