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Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

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Post by Snow_Angel Fri 26 Feb 2010, 10:14 am

I wrote this poem last night, so it's not very good. But here it is anyway :]:

Wind whispers through the silent sky,
as silver stars go shooting by,
Children sleep peacefully,
and dogs and cats blink sleepily.

The moon looks fondly down upon
The earth as it falls asleep,
People, animals, and plants alike
Rest in sweet serenity
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Post by superdork11 Fri 26 Feb 2010, 10:58 am

Nice, i like it@ you are good. Nice. it's okay, i right when i'm half asleep most of the time...
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Post by Dreamer Fri 26 Feb 2010, 12:05 pm

That was good! (:
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Post by Music Is Love Fri 26 Feb 2010, 8:18 pm

That was great!
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Post by Snow_Angel Fri 26 Feb 2010, 9:04 pm

Thanks!! :]
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 27 Feb 2010, 12:23 am

Ooh, I liked the use of the word 'Serenity' at the end. Smile A very good poem.
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Post by superdork11 Sat 27 Feb 2010, 8:47 am

Yes!
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