Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .
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Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .
I wrote this poem last night, so it's not very good. But here it is anyway :]:
Wind whispers through the silent sky,
as silver stars go shooting by,
Children sleep peacefully,
and dogs and cats blink sleepily.
The moon looks fondly down upon
The earth as it falls asleep,
People, animals, and plants alike
Rest in sweet serenity
Wind whispers through the silent sky,
as silver stars go shooting by,
Children sleep peacefully,
and dogs and cats blink sleepily.
The moon looks fondly down upon
The earth as it falls asleep,
People, animals, and plants alike
Rest in sweet serenity
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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .
Nice, i like it@ you are good. Nice. it's okay, i right when i'm half asleep most of the time...
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Ooh, I liked the use of the word 'Serenity' at the end. A very good poem.
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