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Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

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Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by Snow_Angel on Fri 26 Feb 2010, 10:14 am

I wrote this poem last night, so it's not very good. But here it is anyway :]:

Wind whispers through the silent sky,
as silver stars go shooting by,
Children sleep peacefully,
and dogs and cats blink sleepily.

The moon looks fondly down upon
The earth as it falls asleep,
People, animals, and plants alike
Rest in sweet serenity
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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by superdork11 on Fri 26 Feb 2010, 10:58 am

Nice, i like it@ you are good. Nice. it's okay, i right when i'm half asleep most of the time...
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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by Dreamer on Fri 26 Feb 2010, 12:05 pm

That was good! (:

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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by Music Is Love on Fri 26 Feb 2010, 8:18 pm

That was great!
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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by Snow_Angel on Fri 26 Feb 2010, 9:04 pm

Thanks!! :]
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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 27 Feb 2010, 12:23 am

Ooh, I liked the use of the word 'Serenity' at the end. Smile A very good poem.

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Re: Wind Whispers Through the Silent Sky. . .

Post by superdork11 on Sat 27 Feb 2010, 8:47 am

Yes!
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