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MORE poetry by Mia

Post by Fallen Archangel on Sat 15 May 2010, 1:59 pm

Maturity; From Average to High
Fantasy; Mainly Low

The newest are at the top and the oldest are at the bottom.
The titles of the poems are in caps. ^w^

Enjoy. :3

YOUR SHADOW AND YOU

I've seen your shadow cast upon you,
I've seen the things your shadow can do.
I've watched it tear everyone in two,
it never seems new

Your faith is slowly falling apart,
Leaving what remains, in your heart.
I know it's all bound to start,
but the feeling in you is about to depart.

I PROMISED YOU DEATH

It's finally time,
THAT YOU LEAVE ME BE.
For a second or two,
OR FOR ETERNITY.

Because I promise you,
THAT NEXT TIME IT'S JUST YOU AND ME
You'll be dead,
YOU'LL SEE.

MY DEATH PLEASES YOU

TRAPPED BENEATH MY PALE SKIN,
i feel my life wither away.

TO ASHES OR NOTHING AT ALL,
i feel myself break down to my dismay.

my skull once crushed in your grasp,
THERE'S TRULY NOTHING LEFT TO SAY.

and now that i'm finally gone forever,
YOU MAY AT LAST CONCLUDE THIS YOUR BEST DAY.


FATE STRUCK ME DOWN

Can't you see
Black and uneasy
My blood isn't red
Yet it still runs through my veins

I can not stand my skin
Pale and sickened
These are all my sins
Yet I still commit them everyday

Gaze into my eyes
Red and tear-filled
They are ones to despise
Yet they still serve me well

Fate has struck me down
Cold and heartless
I fall to the ground
Yet I still remain alive


CAN IT REALLY BE LOVE?

Cursed by the pain,
Ashes are all that remain,
Never to be seen when washed by the rain.

Inside of me,
There once was a heart you could see.

Reality is now a lie,
Erased by thoughts that we deny.
All this time I wondered why,
Listening to you was even worth a try.
Leaving me there to cry,
You did nothing as I began to die.

Beleive in what once was right,
Eliminate the fact that we'll never see night.

Life has left me with wounds that won't heal,
One from the pain I always feel.
Venomous and unable to reveal,
Even this relationship was one to conceal.


SILENCED ROSES

Surrender yourself to darkness.
Illuminate your path, no longer.
Lengthen your hope, no more.
Eliminate everyone that stands in your way.
Never look back at your past.
Concentrate on what really matters now.
Everything is but a blur.
Deliver yourself to your new life.

Remember how I used to be.
Only left as traces in my memory.
Silence has now filled the air.
Each rose petal has a color of its own.
So keep this in mind and choose your fate.


EACH PETAL IS STAINED WITH YOUR BLOOD
because you never pledged yourself to darkness

LEAVE ME TO DIE

Listen to my cries of pain,
Eliminate my tears that blend with the rain.
All I see is blood running down my skin,
Viciously dripping from my cuts of sin.
Everything is just about to begin.

My life is just as you said,
Everything I touch turns dead.

Tomorrow will be a new day,
Only fate will leave me with nothing to say.

Darkness has finally found me,
I no longer have anything left to see.
Everyone knows I am no longer somebody.


I EVENTUALLY DIED
{because you left me there}
AND NOW YOU DIE BEFORE MY VERY EYES

SIGHTLESS DEATH

Animosity dwells within me,
As cold as obscurity.
A life quite eerie,
All just what I wasn't planning to be.

I'm tied by these chains,
That cause me great pain.
I can feel the rain,
That is no shame.

And as time passes by,
All I know is that I will die.
As tears fall as I begin to cry,
And I remember that my life was all a lie.

I have a right,
To gaze solemly without sight.
I'll see the beautiful night,
To know that I was right.

I can not see.
And that's just me.


AWAKE, YET DEAD

A cold black night,
Without a single hint of light.
Amongst everything,
Known is that no one's listening.
Enguled in darkness, I am.

You're just another to kill, I said.
Even if you're already dead.
There's nothing left to do, or say.

Damaged and in pain,
Everything has left me insane.
And yet I can never feel,
Darkness that just isn't real.


AWAKE
YET
DEAD

DREAMS BEYOND DEATH [THE SECOND POEM]

Dreams that follow you
Beyond one's end we may call
Death as to being shattered to peices

These dreams will follow you even after Death
No matter the circumstances


JUST KILL ME NOW

Just
Kill
Me
Now


Take your bloody knife
And take me from my life

Soon will come night
And the day will end without a fight

Pay close attention to me
And tell me what you see

I am just your reflection
Not a descendent from heaven

Take a moment to savor
By doing me one simple favor

Never the less can you just try
Because I'd rather die

Just go ahead
Do as I'd said

So take your bloody knife
And take me from my life


BIDING FAREWELL

I'll take a knife,
And easily seperate you from your life.
I'll help you die,
And make sure you cry.
This will be a certain goobye.

All I wish to ever see,
A sight so lovely,
Is your blood,
My love.

I'll run away,
From wherever your body may lay.
I just wish you could look at me,
Because I'm sorry.
So I bid you farewell.
Maybe I'll see you down in *heck*.

THE DAWN OF NIGHT

Life seems to fail,
When justice won't prevail.
Struck by darkness,
A death I won't harnest.
Fallen under and risen above,
Something I will never love.
Darkness falling over light,
A wretched and horrid sight,
Signalling the arrival of night.
I'll try not to cry,
Even if I'm destined to die.

The Dawn Of Night,
The Dawn Of Death.


THE OBSCURITY OF THE CATACOMBS

Deepened obscurity,
Is all we ever see.
Memories of our past,
That were destined to never last.
These memories are so distant,
But yet we could touch them in an instant.
As we are surrounded by hate,
I guess this was our fate.
Yet these are the catacombs,
Our wretched homes.
I guess we were destined to die,
Because all we ever did was lie.


WHAT I USED TO BE

I know one day I may die,
Without surpressing a single sigh.
My coldhearted scarlet blood,
Will run down and stain the mud.
An unwanted sight,
After a long and brutal fight.
All this was fate,
All this was hate.
As I look down from heaven,
I see my own reflection.
All I may see,
Is what I used to be.


DEEPENING THORNS

These thorns are within,
And they deepen per sin.
Seeing how this was fate,
It didn't come strike me too late.
Yet, I won't go too far,
With all of these scars.
And so you see,
My life isn't what I expected it to be.
Because I was born,
With these deepenin thorns.

TIED TO MY SINS

I'm bound to these chains,
Prepared to die.
By sorrowful shame,
That circles my lies.

Plunging or diving,
Down to my fate.
It's all about surviving,
Before it's too late.


Silence within,
From what I can see.
All just sins,
Tied to the obscurity.


HOW ARE YOU?

Ask me how I've been,
See how much I sin.

Taking a knife to the heart?
Think you're really that smart?

Will you be paying?
Or dying?

The choice belongs to you,
Just choose what to do.

Because while time passes,
I'll be burning you to ashes.

Next time you see me,
Guess where we'll be.

No doubt we won't be well,
When we meet in *heck*.


LIFELESS

Lost and forgotten,
We've never been found.
Deathly silent,
We do not make a sound.

Doom has fallen upon us,
As we approach our fate.
Broken and torn,
We are no longer able to hate.

We wish we knew,
How we could survive.
We know what's at risk,
Are our lives.

What we are to be,
Is dead and hopless.
Pale faces and sickened expressions,
We are nothing but lifeless.


THESE WOUNDS

All words can do,
Is break you in two.
I know forgiving me,

Won't be easy.
But these wounds won't heal,
When they aren't real.


JUST GO AND DIE

Since the day I'd seen you leave,
I knew there was no reason to live.

I'd watched you walk away from me,
That lifeless expression set upon your brightened face.

My gaze fixed on you,
As you turned your back on me.

You slowed your pace,
And stopped that once.

You gave me that last look,
The look of a sadened expression.

Your face reminded me of all those good times we've had together,
And of how much I've loved you.

Just turn around you heartless fool,
You've reminded me of our darkened days.

Just leave me to die,
And just go ahead and kill yourself.

I don't care anymore about how you feel,
Or about how much you even loved me.

You've hurt me,
Mentally and physically.

You useless fool,
Just go and die.

YOU ARE NOT FORGIVEN

You are not forgiven,
And never will you even be.

Because of what you've done,
I am lost and hopeless.

Just like you used to be,
Without my presence.

I cry every night,
As reality deeply hits me.

But these wounds shall never heal,
When they just aren't real.

And every single day,
I bleed the life out of me.

And it's all your fault.
Because you will not,
Nay, Never,
Be forgiven.


AGAIN

Are your intentions,
To murder me,
And throw me across,
To the land of the dead?


God knows you're a fool,
But I never knew that,
Right up until,
This very day.


Alone I was,
Ti'll I met you.
But now I regret,
That we've ever met.


Inside I'm hurt,
Twisted and torn apart,
Shredded to bits,
So hurt deep down.


Never will I ever,
Trust you one bit.
I can't beleive I trusted you.
How foolish I was.


Again and again, I always fall for your tricks.

BREATHE

Breaking apart,
As life fails to proceed.


Reaching for what,
Once was my soul.


Eliminating everything,
That stands in my way.


Airless and emotionless,
I'm bound to die.


The truth,
Deeply sunken beneath.


Helpless and lifeless,
I will soon become.


Erasing what,
I used to be.
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Post by Music Is Love on Sat 15 May 2010, 8:31 pm

WOW! Those are AMAZING!!! I'm clueless as to what to say. Thay are just fantastic!! Keep it up (:
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 16 May 2010, 5:14 pm

Oh wow... Just... wow. Incredible. I'm left speechless.

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 16 May 2010, 6:06 pm

Wow! Those are amazing, Mia.
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Post by Fallen Archangel on Sat 22 May 2010, 9:47 am

Thanks, guys. I've made more, recently. I plan on posting them, soon. :3
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Post by superdork11 on Sat 22 May 2010, 10:04 am

Ooh! Yea!
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Post by Fallen Archangel on Sat 22 May 2010, 10:06 am

http://dreamer.forumotion.net/poetry-f8/even-more-poetry-by-mia-t264.htm

All three poems there were made like.. this week. :3
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Post by superdork11 on Sat 22 May 2010, 10:10 am

Yeah, I read those too, they too, are amazing!
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Post by Dreamer on Fri 28 May 2010, 2:51 pm

Once again, you leave me speechless. Incredible, Mia!

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Post by superdork11 on Fri 28 May 2010, 6:39 pm

Yes, I know! Amazing!
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Post by Fallen Archangel on Thu 01 Jul 2010, 11:46 am

Thanks! 83
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