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Post by Pipeman Thu 15 Jul 2010, 2:09 pm

OK, I had to do something for school and this is what I did!

I wonder if the end will ever come, and then;
I hear women crying, but no soul dares defend.
I see the secret lying, despite our willful trying,
To lock him in a cage.
I wish to go home, but home has run away;
We burn up as we race against the sound of fate.

I pretend that nothing here was ever real,
That our lies will take us where they tell.
I feel the tears are falling, running out of pace,
Futile in their attempts, to win the endless race.

I worry that insanity consumes us as we wait,
That nothing can escape madness in his hate.
I understand there is no escape, not in this life, nor the next;
That all the pain shall follow
Into the dark abyss.

I try to stifle conscience, but still he chips away;
Humanity was broken, long before today.
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Post by Dreamer Thu 15 Jul 2010, 2:12 pm

Ooooh! That was really good! It was very deep and insightful and bravo with the rhyming!
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Post by Pipeman Thu 15 Jul 2010, 2:15 pm

Blush

*Stares at creepy signature*

Thank you. /meekness
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Post by Tolly12bells Thu 15 Jul 2010, 2:19 pm

Ooooh... Wow. Yes, the rhyming was INCREDIBLE! And very deep, and dark. But... just wow.
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