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~The Story With No Name~ By Me :)

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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Sat 16 Jan 2010, 4:20 pm

As the title indacates, i dont really have a name for this story... i also wasn't too sure this is the right place to post it Razz i guess its sort of like a journal of my life in another persons world(because of that, there wont be much conversation), if that makes any sence. The characters names are in japanese, because im cool like that and thats how i roll. i guess you could say that this is a very poetic, very sad romance story. so please, take a look and enjoy Smile
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actually, i have to leave now. so i'll post it when i get back(30-45min?) lol sorry for the faulse start.
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 16 Jan 2010, 5:27 pm

Sounds very interesting! Yes, I believe that this is the right place you should put this. Nadine (Dreamer) or I will let you know after you've posted a bit, because it might go best in the Memoirs section. But let's hear it first. Smile
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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Sat 16 Jan 2010, 7:01 pm

i is back! Very Happy i will probably only post the first chapter or so cuz i gots some new pokemon cards to play with ;3 anyhow, here it goes...

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As far as fomal introductions go, i am not one who enjoys such a painful, long, mostly unnessary process, but i feel that now it may be needed. I am myself. I always have been, and unfortunatly always will be me. My thoughts are elaborate and complex. I analyze -sometimes over analyze- every choice i must make. If one were to record my thoughts as scientific data, even with years of hard labor and studying, the result would be chaos. But, i have methods to my madness. I often feel as though i will nevr be fully understood. But i do not aim for others satisfaction. I do not wish to change who i am just so others may be able to understand for even the slightest instant.

As far as i am concerned, emotions are nothing more than a piece of imaginary fiction. I can not feel, nor can i comprehend the theroy of a special mood comming over one's self due to a certain situation or occuring event. I can not remember the last time i felt something 'real'. That is, with the exception of one thing... My Prince. He is the only thing that allows me to feel. But, i cannot honstly say that what i feel towards him are actually real emotions. It is true, i would most certainly die for him; without a second thought i would replace my life with his. But do i honstly, truly love him? Only time will reveal the answer. Until that time, i will continue to believe that he is my true Prince.

I have started this journal as a record of my life. I fill pour all of my thoughts into this writing. If all goes as planned, this journal will read like a story, a fairytale if you will. The characters are as follows: Myself, Akuma Yoji, my loving Prince, Amai Kou, and my two best friends, Itoshii Bara and Egio Masurao. Together, we will create, for your pleasure, a story of comedy, mystery, and romance, as my life unfolds. But, reader be warned, fairytales do not always have happy endings. With that, our story will now begin.

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that's the intro. eace of the characte'rs names translate into the role they play in the story.
Akuma Yoji- Devil Child
Amai Kou- Loving Prince
Itoshii Bara- Beautiful Rose
Eigo Masurao- Brave Knight
I hope you enjoyed it! i'll post the next chapter when i finish it. bye till then~


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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 16 Jan 2010, 8:37 pm

Ooh... I like it a lot! Yes, I believe this is in the right section. Smile Add mored! Silly
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Post by Dreamer Sat 16 Jan 2010, 9:05 pm

Ooohh!! I really like it! It's very well written, I like your word choice. More!!! Silly
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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Sat 16 Jan 2010, 9:35 pm

Thanks! im glad you like it! Smile

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Day One- Once Apon A Time and Happily Ever Afters
Love. The one ting that binds two together as one. The only thing that allows our shallow, empty souls to have any purpose. Without it, would we truly live? No. Without love, we could not live, we could only exist. For some, finding love can be quite a challange. For others, it can be simple. I myself have found love before. I know well it's sweet sting, it's sad songs, and it's happy moments. There is no other feeling like the feeling of knowing that no matter how unperfect you are, that the person will love you for your flaws and know who you truly are. But, is it truly worth it? Love never lasts. The pain of losing the one person who you owe your life to... The results are devastating. The pain is overwhelming. Some how, you must find a way to wake up every morning and find the strength to face the rest of the day. With our heads heald high, we put on our masks and continue to lie. Sadly, no matter how many times you say 'I'm fine' you never actually get any better. We must find a way to overcome everything that stands in our way. Although we gasp for breath, our lungs can no longer hold the air which we so desire. Although we try to love again, we cannot, for the very place that our heart used to reside is the same place that a deep wound now exists. A wound from the hole that was torn by the shards of our broken heart. Yes, the pain is intense, but we must learn to live daily with that pain. We must learn to survive no matter what we may have to endure. We must try to live on.

One might go to extreme lengths to obtain anothers love. True or not. They believe that as long as someone loves them, everything will be okay. So they continue through the misstreatment and suffering. They contiune through believing that no matter what, they need love to live. It is a sad life. I pitty those who must live such sorrowful lives. But in saying that, am i not pittying myself? Am i not condeming myself to their same horrible fate? I ofthen have judged others because they withstand such pain for love that is nothing but makebelieve. I have wrongly accused others, unaware that i too live a lie just as they do. I too force myself to withstand agonizing pain and suffering, hoping that my efferts will be noticed by him and that he will love me. Have i waisted my life on a lie? No. I must not let myself for get how much i love him. I do not care if the same kindness and respect are returned. I only wish that he allows me to love him unconditionally. Forever.

I now admit the truth. Yes, it is sad but true. I have in fact fallen in love. I unknowingly fell into the trap. But somehow, i do not wish to be freed from it's grasp. I cannot help but fall for his charm, his sweetness, his words. Few others retain abilites such as his. With the simpliest of words and the greatest of ease he can make my heart stop and make me gasp for breath. I am speechless in his presence. He does these tings unknowingly and wonders why i cannot talk to him easily. I find conversation dificult when the air i so desperatly need is far out of my reach. I am breathless in his presence. I love you, my Prince. If only you could know...

If only i could tell you. Oh! how i long to express to you my feelings! How i wish you knew the passion that burns in my soul for you! But, i will not- no, i can not lose you. When i am with you, all others are silenced. The business of the world is quieted. The murmmer of the people is hushed. It is as if the world has stopped truning; it is like time has stopped ticking away. Quiet. The only sound that can be heard is the faint beating of his heart. Rhythmic and soft. I sand by you in utter disbelief. You are so purely perfect. He is my life. He is my only love. He is my Prince. But this is no dream and life is no fairytale. Life is not made of Once Apon a Time and Happily Ever Afters. I am forced to face the terrifying truth. He will never love me as i love him.

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I'll try to post the next chapter tomorrow. thanks for reading! Wink Bye for now~
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 16 Jan 2010, 9:41 pm

Incredible! You're writing's very captivating! Love... What a thing. Very well written.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:03 pm

*applause* I agree with Lauren 100% !
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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:13 pm

^-^ thanks! i really appreciate the support! i've never let anyone read any of my writing(besides my L.A. teacher lol) before, fo its nice to know that people actually enjoy it Smile
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Post by Dreamer Sat 16 Jan 2010, 10:18 pm

Yup, it's good. (: Except for some capitalization stuff and a few tiny spelling errors, it is amazing. Very well written.
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 16 Jan 2010, 11:10 pm

I agree. Smile It's always a little bit nerve-wracking to put up your first story. After this, all the nervousness will go away. Smile
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Post by Dreamer Sun 17 Jan 2010, 8:32 am

Yup. Nod
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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Wed 20 Jan 2010, 4:45 pm

Day two- In the presence of an angel

Although sometimes i may deny this, the facts are true. I love him and i always wish that he will be at my side forever. I deny this because i fear that if he were to know about my feelings that he would reject me. When ever someone attemts something they've never done before, is there not always some fear? We all may act brave on the surface, but on the inside we are broken and torn and scared. We all fear pain, failure, rejection. This is an unchangable part of life. Everyone has to deal with such horrible things at one point in our lives. If one never felt pain, could that person possibly live a happy life? The feeling of loss, despair, loneliness, and sadness may be unpleasent, but it is these unpleasent thoughts and memories that shape who we are. A life without pain is not a life that can be easily enjoied. At one time in our lives, we have all wished that we could be happy all the time and never have to worry about bad things. But, if we are not forced to face these things, how are we expected to face other less challenging tasks? There is no way we can live a life without unpleasent things occuring. It is a fact of life, and we must embrace it with an open mind and a smile on our faces. Because although it may seem like you will never be able to excape all of the tragic events, you must not give up hope. You will be able to smile again. Wounds heal in time. Happiness does truly exist, you just have to find it.

How am i able to speak such wisdom to you, if i myself do not believe it's true? These words mean nothing to me. Happiness can never be granted to such a imperfect and borken being. I have no hope for the future. I do not believe that i will ever be able to smile again, i mean really smile. I have perfected the act of pretending for the sake of others. I have learned how to fake emotions and smiles. Just because i must live a life of pain and despair does not mean that i wish the same fate apon others. I want to see others smile, and laugh, and enjoy their youth. Maybe one day, just once, for the slightest moment, i will be able to do the same and actually mean what i say and what i do. But this is only a dream of mine, and dreams do not always become reality. I wonder... Could he also wish these things for me? Could he share my dream? I never thought that i ment much to him, my sweet sweet Prince. I always thought that i was simply his "acquaintance" nothing more. But i have been worng before. Is it possible that i could actually mean something to him?

I must be crazy to think such thoughts! How could i actually mean something to him? How could he care about me? Most everyone i meet does not care about me or my feelings. Could he some how be different? There must be an answer to one of these questions... However, there is a chance that - although it may seem crazy- he could actually care about me beyond the point of friendship. He knows me well. He can read me easily. He knows when im just upset and when im depressed. Still, he does not know that he actually causes me such stress and pain. How would he feel if he were to know that it is him who makes me weep? Would he laugh? smile? cry? Would he even care? I am not willing to take a chance and find out. Informing him of this may cause him to modify his behavior and actions. I love him, and i do not wish for him to change in the slightest.

He is so perfect in every way. I connot begin to explain in detail how utterly flawless he is. But i will try to describe to you his perfection so that you too may be able to know such untainted beauty. His voice is like a violin's song, brisk but sorrowful. His melodies sing softly to me while i sleep, while i dream. Each note is sharp and crisp, yet his music flows together so faultlessly, like a stream in a bountiful forest, so bright and green. As his song continues i begin to weep at the pureness of his voice. His eyes, oh! how beautiful are his eyes! They are the deepest shade of brown, very mysterious and alluring. He looks at me with those eyes, those amazingly exquisite eyes, and causes my heart to stop beating. But it is not just his physical beauty that bewitches my soul. For within his perfect body lies a perfect heart. His heart is so pure and so perfect. Some times i begin to wonder if he, my Prince, is in fact an angel sent by God to watch over me. Each night i pray and thank him of allowing me to have known such perfection in my life. I love him. He is my Prince.

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Yay! finally got it up! sorry it took me so long. I only write well when im really sad or really happy, so most days i dont write well. so yeah... hope you enjoy it! be expecting more soon! ;P
also, i apologise if im repeating myself. i dont really look at this chapter compared to the others. but it's not really repeating, im just trying to make a point. and i don't proof read, so there is often going to be some spelling/grammar issues and for that i also apologise, sumi-masen Smile


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Post by Dreamer Wed 20 Jan 2010, 6:04 pm

That was really good! I like it! Nod
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 20 Jan 2010, 7:44 pm

Excellent. Nod I'm getting hooked. Silly
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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Wed 20 Jan 2010, 8:23 pm

thankerz~ im starting to get annoied with it though. it's getting harder and harder to not use the same words over and over Razz i guess it's a good thing that im a thesaurus! Nod
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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Wed 03 Feb 2010, 5:33 pm

...

Day Three- Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again...

So long, so very long it has been since the last time we met. How long? I can not even begin to guess. For as long as I have known, people are always astounded at my memory. I can remember even the slightest little details, no matter how unimportant they may seem to be. Even for me though, memories fade. I can no longer remember my first birthday, nor my first kiss. Yet still through all the maddnes and chaos of life, still I remember your face. I recall how your smile warmed my heart even on the days when it seemed as the world may end in a matter of seconds. I remember how you would never fail at making me laugh even when my life had seen no hope, no light. Where have those days gone? Have we finally grown up? Is our play and makebelieve finally at an end? I pray to god not. Without those days, such perfect, carefree moments, my life would surely turn into a living hell. Is this not true? You have seen it. You know very well of the pain I face when your presence is lacking in my life. Yet still you torture me so. Why? You are fully aware of the concequences, and still you risk a life for what seems to be your own person gain. You are indeed a sick being. Even still my feelings are never-changing. I will adapt, just as my ancesters before me, I will learn to cope with, and eventually adore, your wicked ways. It is because I love you, and because I need you.

What will become of me, I wonder...?

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I had so much more I wanted to write, but I was (rudely) interrupted in the middle of my sad moment. So, while singing the pokemon theme song, I decided to end this chapter here and continue it another day. Oh, and I'm sorry for not updating the story for a long time. I've just had a lot to do and all that.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 03 Feb 2010, 6:59 pm

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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Fri 12 Feb 2010, 8:30 pm

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Day five- Loved and Lost...

I hate this. I hate this souless, lifeless cage that I live in. When I am faced to a mirror, I turn away in total disgust. I hate myself with a passion like no one would understand. I hate these wounds, these scars, these lies. What kind of a body is this? I would much rather be in Hell, for the dark depths of hatred and dispare are surely a much more pleasent place to be. I am cut, and as the blood pours out of my veins and spills on the floor, I try desperatly to sew the injury, and as the blood still empties from my heart, I still try. Why is it that I try, though? If I turly hate this prison cell I live in, why do I attempt to save it? If I didn't have this one body, and this one life, where would I go? Would I be rejoicing with the angles on the streets of gold, or would I be singing with the beautiful demons in the pits of sorrow?

I could invision these things, the golden pathways, the rank hole, the shrill vries of the violin and the cello as the angles and demons fight over my exsistance. I imagined them as I walked through the many rows of the large Victorian houses and huge oak trees. Past the old churces and parks where I once played as a young child. I walked as the rain poured from the grey, thunderous clouds in the dark sky. Everything was obscured in the inky blackness of the night. What time could it be? It must be around midnight. A flash of lightning illuminated the ancient masions and decayed picket fences, which were once as white as fresh milk or pearls. I could see how the weeds and vines enclosed the houses as if swallowing them into a black abyss.

I was well aware of the tall, lanky figure that had been following me on my journey. He was, I observed, about 6' and had a black trenchcoat on that seemed to brush against the ground as he slowly staggered in the cold rain. Not once did I stop to engage the man in conversation, for I was totally carless as to who he was, what he was doing, and why he was following me. It was not unusual that I am followed on my regular strolls in the rain. There was always someone who wanted to inquire about something that had happened long ago. The truth is this, it was truly a long time ago, and it is not a memory I care to recall. It has bee exactly five years on this very night that the "accident" occured. I was never fully proven innocent, nor guilty, and some still believed that I was the cause of all the lives lost that night. I myself am not even sure. But I do know that I will not be punished for a crime I did not commit.

As I turned the final bend in the maze of sidewalks and houses, I saw it. The soft glow of porch lights in the distance. My house is one of the few left standing after the tragity. Although, it's surroundings and posture were very similar to the moss-covered, molded houses that were literally being eaten away by disease. The white picket fence remained in the very same spot it had been the day I had moved in, but it's color was fading and peeling away from the rotted wood. The squeaky hindges of the small gate always gave great resistance, and almost do not even budge as force is applied. The nearly dead passion fruit vines that once produced breath-taking flowers now cling to the sides of the house, shrivled and unbaring. The floorboards of the long, wrap-around porch are decaying and old, and much like the fence, the paint is starting to seperate from the wood itself. The windows are fogged up with dust for they have never been opened. But amoungst all of this chaos lies the front door. The door is the only object on the house that is in decent shape. The paint has yet to crack or peel, the knob still functons as it is meant to, and the bell still rings as clearly as it always has.

This was my home, and I was glad to return after my memorable outing. As I opened that great door, music and light poured out the door and out into the night. The inside is just as grand as the outside had once been, but the details of the structure are unimportant at this point. I walked passed the rooms filled so full of mountains of paper that the door barely opens. I passed the library that is filled with all of my favorite novles and writings. I passed the kitchen, where the aromas of this mornings breakfast of burnt bacon and undercooked eggs still lingered in the air. The house was very messy, but I do not care. I know where things are, and that's where they ought to be, and that's where they'll stay. All I cared about now was sleep. I changed out of my soaked clothes and into a pair of well worn pajamas and dried my hair for the most part, and crawled into my warm bed. I closed my eyes and dreampt. I dreampt of my Prince, as I always do, for this is normal for me. Even I was astounded at how vivid and realistic my dream was....

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Yay! Longest chapter I have ever writen! I hope you like being able to take a glance at where my character lives. I'll try to get the next part up soon. I hope you don't die from the suspence xD


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Post by MeIsADinosaur:) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 9:21 pm

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Day Five- Slumbering Fantasies

The air was thin and warm, and as the smell of expencive perfume hung heavily in the air, the sound of violins and cello playing in sorrowful harmony filled the small room. The space was dimly light by candles veiled the room with a light, mist-like somke. The thick, luxurious, blood red curtains were draped all along the walls, almost completely covering the many large windows that surrounded the room all except for one wall of the library-like chamber. As the air shifted slightly, it caused a curtain to sway, letting in a shallow beam of light from the street lamps outside. While the room was illuminated for this small instant, I noticed a ominous, dark shadow move swiftly across the small suite. I sat up in bed and searched the surrounding area, which had once again been overtaken by inky blackness. Although I was still aware of the presence in the room, I managed to convince myself that I must still be dreaming. I saw it again after I lay my head on the soft pillow. A tall figure was moving across the room. Before my mind could fully decompose and understand the information I was just presented, I not only was completely sure that there was infact someone else in my room, but i was sure that I felt him.

I was being restrained on the bed by two large hands which had pinned my wrists to the headboard while my hips were being controled by the waist of the man. Although I could not see, I could feel that his face was very close to mine, because his cold, sweet breath was pouring over my face, and his wet hair was dripping on the pillow near my ear. I have always thought I had very quick reflexes, but I was so shocked by this sudden attack that I was too frightened to struggle. He was cold all over; I could feel his skin against mine. He gentally pressed his soft lips to mine, quickly seducing me with his body. I tried to fight it, but I could not help but enjoy this experience. It took me quite a long moment to notice that I was in pain. He was pressing hard against my body, and I though, surely I will be brused all over by morning. I somehow excaped his strong grip and pushed him away with all my power. It was not quite like I had expected. Instead of him removing himself from on top of me, he simply rolled over and dragged me with him. This position was not very much more comfortable. My tiny weak body was no match for his muscular frame, and in result, he again menouvered my body under his, and began to kiss me all over.

I was trapped. My mind was beginning to weaken, and i was slowly scumming to his body. It seemed that it had begun so quickly, and in the same way, it ended. I was again alone in my room. It was morning and soft light was pouring through the windows. I lay there and pondered what I had just dreampt.

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Post by Dreamer Tue 16 Feb 2010, 9:50 pm

Just caught up on the past three chapters. *applause* Wonderfully done. Very descriptive and intriguing.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 17 Feb 2010, 6:57 pm

Ooh, O.o, very good adjectives in that last one. Smile
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Post by superdork11 Sun 21 Feb 2010, 7:19 pm

Yeah... that is amazing. You are really good at writing! Wow, that was amazingly deep. Especially the first two.
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Day Six- As Time Stands Still

As I wondered aimlessly around my kitchen, searching for something to quiet the small grumbles comming from my shomach, I began to notice that the drops of water dripping from my damp hair were beginning to create a small puddle on the tiled floor. It didn't make much of a difference, since the house was going to be cleaned today, but I decided to clean up any way to save myself some work later. One could say that my method of "cleaning up" a small mess was not very clean at all. In this case, that statement was true. I simply threw a bunch of papertowels over top of the puddle to cover it up. To me, it was "clean." Afterwards, I was faced with one of the most challenging parts of my day; what to eat for breakfast. "It's the most important mean of the day," everyone always used to tell me. "Don't skip breakfast or you'll be hungry all day!" I never actually payed much attention when my parents lectured me about my eating habits. So I don't eat a lot, does it really matter that much? I don't think so... Today, March 15 to be exact, was going to be a great day; it had to be. I moaned at the thought of how much preperation I still had to do. My stomach rumbled again, reminding me that I still had not eaten anything. So, I made myself a bowl of cereal and trotted off, leaving the small mound of soggy papertowels on the floor. I was happy. Today was going to be an amazing day!

"I love the smell of bleach in the mornings!" My mother said with thick sarcasm in her voice. I hadn't noticed her walk in until she spoke. "I know how 'good' you are at cleaning, and I know how big today is for you, so I decided to come help you prepare!"
"Thats fine Mom, I can do it myself."
She looked into the kitchen and noticed the mess still on the floor. That didn't help prove my point very much... She looked at me and said, "I'm staying!"
There was no arguing with that! I guess it would be nice to have someone else to clean the house for me, so I could focus on other horid tasks, such as deciding, and eventually cooking dinner. So, I let my mom take over the cleaning while I dried my hair, got dressed, and started making a menu for the evening meal.

After what seemed like hours of work, it was finally time. I sat in the library waiting. I tried to pretend that I wasn't nervous, but I'm sure that every worry shown intensly on my face. I sat for a long time, or I think a long time. The old clock hanging on the wall was broken, it always had been. It was broken when I moved into the house, and my guess is that it will be broken for as long as I live here as well. The library was always my favourite place to spend my extra time. There seemed to be an endless amount of books surrounding me. It made me feel very secure and safe. There was also a certain nastalga about this room. My mother used to tell me, "It's because time will always stand still in this room; the clock says so. So don't worry, as long as you are here, you will never run out of time again!" Now I knew better. Time never actually stood still, I was living proof of that. I had spent many years sitting in this very chair, reading. But as the years went on, and the books were read, and the building aged, I aged too. My body became stronger and I got taller. I grew up, despite my promise with Father Time that I never would.

My timer for rememberance was cut short by a loud knock at the large front door. Even though I knew who was standing on the other side, my heart still skipped a beat when I reached for the handle and opened the door.

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Sorry its only a little today! and I also apologise for the long delay! Lately I've been in the mood to draw, which I usually never do... well. So, I've spent the past two or three weeks drawing constantally. I was sort of afraid that if I started writing again, all of my drawing talent would somehow disappear. But, I took the risk anyhow, and here is the finished result! Thanks for reading everyone! ^3^
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