Edit and criqe the begining of my book

~Ink~

Prologue
Jade V’olose looked out of the oak paneled windows she did every typical Morning, Every typical day, of every typical year; but this day was not like that.
Jade Woke from slumber one cold morning and stumbled down past the recreation room into the dining room. She looked out of the window and was alarmed; everything was black and white, houses, sidewalks, and even the sun. Jade walked outside, franticly to touch something to make sure that she was not dreaming. However, if she were dreaming, then it would soon become all too real.

Chapter 1
"I can't believe I've been out creeped by another creeper!'

'I'm the stalker not the stalkee'

Jade’s Actors said passionately, being filmed in their début performance, and to add to the filming there was also a live audience, which only added to the stress and tension of it all.
“That was wonderful!” Jade exclaimed whole hardily, after the curtain closed on the last line from James Williams, who plays the stalker who is obsessed with chocolate and was a dangerous villain. “And remember, practice for the next performance; “Upon a Midnight Pillow”, try to practice it, expressly you whom play Christina and Hailey. It was a great Show today, but we can get it ten times better for next week if we try hard enough!” She called to the actors “Practice on Monday, Be here!” Jade called, from her importance chair, both metaphorically and literally.
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“Come on Ell, we’re going to miss the bus!” Jade called to her little sister Elouise. “Mom will KILL me if you’re late to school again!” Jade said, loosing her patience.
“Why would she hurt you, if I’m the one late?” All called in her ignorance
“Because I’m supposed to be taking you there!”
“Oh, well we’re on now so relax.”
“You do remember that I have a job of my own besides watching you.”
“Yeah so”
“Well I won’t be able to watch you all the time you’ll have to go by yourself one day”
“Ok, but in the Future, Now Jaddy, tell me a story”
“What do you want it to be about” Jade had always been a good, and quick thinking storyteller as long as Elouise had remembered and loved any story that she told. However, always answered with the same response;
“Your dreams”
“Ok, here goes” Jade said, her mind whirling.
Once upon a time, a little girl named Melone Was waking up one morning, but when she walked down into her kitchen everything outside was black and white, no colors; only black and white. She was not sure what this meant, so she told no one. Not a soul. However, Melone was Very very scared, and was not sure if she was just imagining it. She has been worrying about it ever since.
“Sorry it’s so short, I’ll tell you more of it later when it happen-, um I mean when I think of it.
“Well your at school off you go” Jade said hurriedly, unsure why she told El what she had seen. Ah no worries, she is too little to even remotely comprehend that the story and I might be connected in some way.


Chapter 2


Coming soon 0_o