autumn has begun

In school we had to write autumn poems this is mine.

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Autumn Has Begun By Me
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The sky is grey the sun is away and that means only one thing that autumn has begun.
The big empty trees and the beautiful leaves.Rustling leaves and leaves falling down,time to get out and about and jump in a pile of leaves.Wrapping up warm and putting your coat on going out to have some fun because autumn has begun.No more summer days just windy days,leaves blowing away and having fun all day because autumn has begun.

Ooh, I like it ! Nice rhyming

I like the line, "The big empty trees and the beautiful leaves."

I totally missed this thread...

I like it.

Thanks you guys this boy in my class told the teacher that my poem was good so i had to read it out to the class.