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Um... Poem of some sort

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 28 Nov 2010, 9:53 am

Okay, I just realized I haven't posted any poetry, so I'll post something I wrote a while ago. I don't know how good it is, but, here goes:


Calm as the lake on a still winter morning,
come and go, ebb and flow,
Rough as the ocean on a stormy day,
come and go, ebb and flow.
Ever constant as the air we breath in and out,
come and go, ebb and flow,
Never there as the months stretch into years,
come and go ebb and flow.
Silent as the peace before the storm,
come and go ebb and flow,
Loud as the voices of one million strong,
come and go, ebb and flow.
Strong as the forces of events to come,
come and go, ebb and flow,
Watching the spirit of life's victims go,
come and go, ebb and flow.
Seeing the tide's gentle thoughts ebb away,
come and go, ebb and flow,
The brook's steady trickle, new life to flow by,
come and go, ebb and flow.
Nothing remains the same forever.


Some parts of that didn't make sense, but, yeah, that's that.
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Post by Dreamer on Sun 28 Nov 2010, 12:20 pm

I really like it! It's deep and I like its focus on nature.

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 28 Nov 2010, 1:48 pm

... Whoa. Why have you never shown me this before, Eileen? I like it a lot!

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:21 am

Thanks, yeah, I was vaguely spazzing out when I wrote it...

'Cause I wrote it at camp, Lauren.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:52 am

AHA. Now I see.

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:54 am

Hah, yeah, it's the first time I've read it since I got back.
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