I Thought You Should Know
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I Thought You Should Know
This is me putting all my thoughts and feelings into a poem. Stuffs been on my mind lately, and all of a sudden I felt the need to let it out, so I did. With a dying pen and the back of my weekend to-do list. It's not my best, but it's defiently something close to my heart. Enjoy? (:
I thought you should know
I'm not over you
I thought you should know
I don't think I'll make it through
Not through this pain
Not through these tears
You never came
You knew I'm full of fears
You brightened my days
Filled my head through the nights
But you won't be there to catch me
I fell from a great height
Nothing can fix my shattered remains
My brokeness means nothing
I've lost this game
You said you were coming
I can't take the lies
I can't take the hate
I can't take the cries
My realization came too late
I thought you should know
I won't make it through
I thought you should know
I can't forget you
I'm not over you
I thought you should know
I don't think I'll make it through
Not through this pain
Not through these tears
You never came
You knew I'm full of fears
You brightened my days
Filled my head through the nights
But you won't be there to catch me
I fell from a great height
Nothing can fix my shattered remains
My brokeness means nothing
I've lost this game
You said you were coming
I can't take the lies
I can't take the hate
I can't take the cries
My realization came too late
I thought you should know
I won't make it through
I thought you should know
I can't forget you
Re: I Thought You Should Know
Wow. o.O That was really good. Wow.
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That was really good... I really liked the line, "Nothing can fix my shattered remains."
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I know what your poem is about and i've been going through tough times to.
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Yay.
I thought you wrote Applesause... But you didn't. I guess I'm just always thinking about food..
I thought you wrote Applesause... But you didn't. I guess I'm just always thinking about food..
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