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I Thought You Should Know

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I Thought You Should Know

Post by Music Is Love on Sun 05 Dec 2010, 9:12 pm

This is me putting all my thoughts and feelings into a poem. Stuffs been on my mind lately, and all of a sudden I felt the need to let it out, so I did. With a dying pen and the back of my weekend to-do list. It's not my best, but it's defiently something close to my heart. Enjoy? (:


I thought you should know
I'm not over you
I thought you should know
I don't think I'll make it through

Not through this pain
Not through these tears
You never came
You knew I'm full of fears

You brightened my days
Filled my head through the nights
But you won't be there to catch me
I fell from a great height

Nothing can fix my shattered remains
My brokeness means nothing
I've lost this game
You said you were coming

I can't take the lies
I can't take the hate
I can't take the cries
My realization came too late

I thought you should know
I won't make it through
I thought you should know
I can't forget you
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Post by superdork11 on Sun 05 Dec 2010, 9:21 pm

Wow. o.O That was really good. Wow.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 9:07 am

That was really good... I really liked the line, "Nothing can fix my shattered remains."

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Post by Dreamer on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 3:00 pm

I really like that! *poetry snapping-applause*

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Post by summer on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 3:33 pm

I know what your poem is about and i've been going through tough times to.
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Post by Music Is Love on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 5:54 pm

Thanks, everyone! ^__^

Lol, snapping-applause. Snapplause? Hm... xD
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Post by superdork11 on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 9:51 pm

Yay.

I thought you wrote Applesause... But you didn't. I guess I'm just always thinking about food..
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