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Post by Music Is Love on Mon 20 Dec 2010, 11:31 pm

You gave me hope
You gave me faith
You took me home
You gave me strength

Like a bird in the sky
You raised me high
You gave me more
You let me soar

As the wounds began to heal
And the way you made me feel
I knew that this was true
All I wanted was you

Then it all changed
And my heart began to break
I was sick of you're games
How much more could I take?

Crimson red tears
Flooded from my wrists
The pain of past years
Brought me to my wits

My wings became battered
I began to fall
You wached as I shattered
Too late to call


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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 20 Dec 2010, 11:32 pm

I started crying during that... That was VERY touching, and super sad, Katie...

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Post by Music Is Love on Tue 21 Dec 2010, 12:01 am

Thanks, Lauren. It was very emotional for me to write and I started crying when I read through it.
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Post by Dreamer on Tue 21 Dec 2010, 6:18 am

That's so sad... I really like the last stanza.

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Post by Mercury on Tue 21 Dec 2010, 1:02 pm

Sad
*Weep* Sooo sad yet...powerful.
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