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A Day Without You

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A Day Without You

Post by WaywardWiccan on Sun 16 Jan 2011, 5:44 pm

Here's my first poem on here! It's one I wrote a while ago when I was a Sophomore in High School. Hope you like it!

A Day Without You

I awaken and realize,
That I'm not in your bed.
That I'm not in your arms.
That I'm alone in my room.

I roll over and cry quietly;
Not wanting to call anyone,
To attention that I am,
Broken hearted and missing you.

Walking the halls of the school,
I see all the couple
And once more,
I want to cry.

I go into the bathroom
And again I cry quietly;
No call anyone,
To my broken heart.

Sitting in class,
Having large discussions;
I'm off far away,
Dreaming of you.

I lay my head down,
And cry softly;
Not wanting to call to attention,
The sight of my vulnerable heart.

Just hanging up the phone,
I miss your voice already.
I can not believe,
I must wait till tomorrow.

I walk to my room,
Lay my head down and softly cry;
For soft crying does not call to attention
The throbbing pain from my broken heart.

I lay down to sleep,
Listen to loud music.
I roll over to the wall,
And hug my pillow tightly.

I say your name softly,
And I begin to cry loudly;
Not caring if I call to attention,
The aching pain from my broken heart.

I wish I didn't have,
To wait to be with you.
Every moment away,
Is more painful than the last.

This is how I spend,
A day without you:
Crying softly while not calling to attention,
That I am broken hearted and missing you.
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Post by Dreamer on Sun 16 Jan 2011, 6:00 pm

Aw, that's really sad but very good.

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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 17 Jan 2011, 6:51 pm

There's so much truth in this poem, it's almost unbelievable. Sad, yes, but true...

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Post by WaywardWiccan on Tue 18 Jan 2011, 4:21 am

Thanks guys! I wrote that about my then boyfriend (now husband). Thought you'd like it. Smile
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Post by superdork11 on Tue 18 Jan 2011, 8:17 am

Aw, that was sad, but really good. (Well, glad you worked out then.)
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Post by summer on Tue 18 Jan 2011, 11:15 am

That was great your very creative.
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Post by WaywardWiccan on Tue 18 Jan 2011, 5:14 pm

Thanks so much to both of you!
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Post by PeggySnow on Tue 18 Jan 2011, 6:42 pm

Excellent poem! Sad, but very good. Glad everything worked out! Nod

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Post by superdork11 on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 8:10 am

Yes. bounce
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Post by WaywardWiccan on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 11:15 am

Thanks again guys. Check out my other poems! Smile
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