A Day Without You
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A Day Without You
Here's my first poem on here! It's one I wrote a while ago when I was a Sophomore in High School. Hope you like it!
A Day Without You
I awaken and realize,
That I'm not in your bed.
That I'm not in your arms.
That I'm alone in my room.
I roll over and cry quietly;
Not wanting to call anyone,
To attention that I am,
Broken hearted and missing you.
Walking the halls of the school,
I see all the couple
And once more,
I want to cry.
I go into the bathroom
And again I cry quietly;
No call anyone,
To my broken heart.
Sitting in class,
Having large discussions;
I'm off far away,
Dreaming of you.
I lay my head down,
And cry softly;
Not wanting to call to attention,
The sight of my vulnerable heart.
Just hanging up the phone,
I miss your voice already.
I can not believe,
I must wait till tomorrow.
I walk to my room,
Lay my head down and softly cry;
For soft crying does not call to attention
The throbbing pain from my broken heart.
I lay down to sleep,
Listen to loud music.
I roll over to the wall,
And hug my pillow tightly.
I say your name softly,
And I begin to cry loudly;
Not caring if I call to attention,
The aching pain from my broken heart.
I wish I didn't have,
To wait to be with you.
Every moment away,
Is more painful than the last.
This is how I spend,
A day without you:
Crying softly while not calling to attention,
That I am broken hearted and missing you.
A Day Without You
I awaken and realize,
That I'm not in your bed.
That I'm not in your arms.
That I'm alone in my room.
I roll over and cry quietly;
Not wanting to call anyone,
To attention that I am,
Broken hearted and missing you.
Walking the halls of the school,
I see all the couple
And once more,
I want to cry.
I go into the bathroom
And again I cry quietly;
No call anyone,
To my broken heart.
Sitting in class,
Having large discussions;
I'm off far away,
Dreaming of you.
I lay my head down,
And cry softly;
Not wanting to call to attention,
The sight of my vulnerable heart.
Just hanging up the phone,
I miss your voice already.
I can not believe,
I must wait till tomorrow.
I walk to my room,
Lay my head down and softly cry;
For soft crying does not call to attention
The throbbing pain from my broken heart.
I lay down to sleep,
Listen to loud music.
I roll over to the wall,
And hug my pillow tightly.
I say your name softly,
And I begin to cry loudly;
Not caring if I call to attention,
The aching pain from my broken heart.
I wish I didn't have,
To wait to be with you.
Every moment away,
Is more painful than the last.
This is how I spend,
A day without you:
Crying softly while not calling to attention,
That I am broken hearted and missing you.
Re: A Day Without You
There's so much truth in this poem, it's almost unbelievable. Sad, yes, but true...
Tolly12bells- Rising Star 2
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Re: A Day Without You
Thanks guys! I wrote that about my then boyfriend (now husband). Thought you'd like it.
Re: A Day Without You
Aw, that was sad, but really good. (Well, glad you worked out then.)
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That was great your very creative.
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Excellent poem! Sad, but very good. Glad everything worked out!
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