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In Love With A Man I Didn't Want

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In Love With A Man I Didn't Want

Post by WaywardWiccan on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 11:08 am

There's quite a few poems I'm posting today. But I didn't want to make a topic for all of them. (Didn't want to be a forum hog Laughing Here they are:

This is a sonnet I wrote for English 4 AP back in High School.

In Love With A Man I Didn't Want

I didn't want a man who looks just like me,
With dark brown hair and eyes.
I wanted a guy with hair like autumn leaves,
And eyes as blue as the bright morning skies.

I love a man with muscles rippling,
As his bronze skin shimmers in the dying sun.
A man whose smile could be crippling,
But alas from this man I must run.

For I'm in love with a man who looks just like me,
The man I always said I didn't wnt.
Yet for this man I will put up a fight.
I will never leave him. No, I won't.

This man is the man and I know it.
I'm in love with this man and I'll show it.

A poem I wrote back in 2006. Again one I wrote for my now husband.

Paradise

Come wih me to a special place,
Where the moonlit sky shimmers wih grace.

The bright shining stars fill the heavens above.
Beautiful yes, ut it can't compare wit the beauty of my love.

As we sit here on the edge of the lake,
It is my heart you unknowingly take.

But it can only be taken so easily by you,
For it is only to you that my love is true.

I would give you the world,
Mountains of gold.
Anything you would ask,
f I would only be so bold.

The finest clothes, a million roses,
So to your heart, I could be closest.

But if I give you these things,
Would you even care?
Would you walk away,
Leaving my heart in despair?

Or would you greet me with open arms?
Accepting me and my love, along with these charms?

So come with me to my special place,
Where our hearts and love shall forever embrace.

Where in the world could this place be?
It can be anywhere you are with me.

Another one from back in 2006.

Is It Love?

"Do you believe it's love?"
That's what everyone asks me.
Well let me tell you,
About what I believe.

My feelings for him,
Won't stop growing.
My feelings for him,
Just can't help showing.

Even when we weren't
Going together,
I still knew that with him,
I wanted a forever.

With each new guy,
Nothing turned my mind,
Away from the man,
Who to me was so kind.

Nothing could ever,
Tear me from him.
Nothing will make me.
Stop loving him.

My feelings show plainly,
Like never before.
So, I know that it's love,
Coming from my heart's core.

It is love, I know this,
I know that it's true.
It is love, I know this,
And I'm telling this to you.

Yes it is love.
Please, believe me now.
Yes it is love.
Just don't ask me how.

This man is so different.
He stole my heart.
How did he do it?
I wouldn't know where to start.

He stole my heart,
When no other man could.
He loved me for me,
Like I thought no one should.

Well he proved me wrong,
And I have fallen for him.
He's proved me wrong,
And I love him.

Written in mid 2007 while we were planning our wedding. It was quite stressful.

Together We'll Make It

We fight,
We yell,
And we scream
As well.

But does this mean,
We've stopped loving?
Does that mean,
That we've stopped caring?

I know we fight,
But we'll make it through.
We'll make it to the end.
Just me and you.

I love you so much,
And my heart is true.
But please never ask me,
To again let go of you.

You are my love,
And you are my life.
And only together,
Can we end this strife.

All I can think of,
During sleepless nights,
Is you and me,
And our endless fights.

Could these disagreements,
Be tearing us apart?
Could they really be making us,
Turn our backs on our hearts?

Please don't let it be.
Don't make me let you go.
A life without you,
Is a life without my glow.

The glow that makes me,
Who I am.
The same glow that makes me,
Do all that I can.

The fights won't disperse,
We must both understand this.
All we can do,
Is try and bring more bliss.

Try to agree
And try not to fight.
Try to hold on,
And try not to lose sight.

Let's not lose sight,
Of who we are.
And that only together,
Can we stand tall.

Together we are stronger,
Than when we are apart.
We must listen to our minds,
And especially our hearts.

This is the only way,
We can pull through.
This is the only way,
That we can stay true.

Not apart.
Not alone.
But together,
We have shown.

We have shown the world,
That we can be,
Forever and ever,
Till eternity.

We must continue to show,
That our love can survive,
Anything at all,
Even a fight.

If we both put in,
A hundred and ten percent,
We'll make it through,
And tell all that we're meant.

To be together forever,
Is my goal in life.
With you as my husband,
And I as your wife.

Together we'll make it.
We'll make it to the day,
That the fighting will stop.
There is a way.

There is a way,
And together we'll find it.
Together we'll pull through.
Together we'll make it.

So what did you think of them??
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Post by Tolly12bells on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 9:02 pm

Those are amazing. I loved "Paradise." It was so sweet, and the imagery was fantastic. They're all great, and all meaningful. ^.^

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Post by PeggySnow on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 9:16 pm

Those are all awesome! Silly It was hard to choose a favorite, but "Paradise" was sweet. ^.^

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Post by WaywardWiccan on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 11:12 pm

Thanks so much guys!
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Post by Dreamer on Wed 19 Jan 2011, 11:53 pm

I loved all of those! Great work. It's so nice to see a real love story power through in the real world. ^.^ We're all pretty much hopeless romantics here, especially me. Eye Roll

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 20 Jan 2011, 8:18 am

Those were really really good! It is great to see someone work out, as we are hopeless romantics. I really liked "Paradise" too. bounce
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Post by Pipeman on Thu 20 Jan 2011, 8:20 pm

Excellent! I, unlike the previous posters, am not a hopeless romantic. I did enjoy all of your poems, especially "Together We'll Make it", and it is definitely a relief to know you made it through your wedding after all. Although my favorite for technicality is the first. This line was a delight: "A man whose smile could be crippling"!
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Post by superdork11 on Fri 21 Jan 2011, 8:12 am

Yeah, they were all good though.
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