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Post by superdork11 on Sat 22 Jan 2011, 10:13 am

Sorry I've been posting all these poems like this, I'm just kinda not feeling it.


Trapped,
Imprisoned,
Alone.
A stranger,
Not me,
Sleeps in my bed,
Eats my food,
Breathes my air.
Looking at myself
Through rippled
Glass.
A layer of
Stress
Ever constant.
Too much stuff
On my mind.
I want to
Scream.
I want to
Cry.
I want to
Go back
To how I was
Before.
For now I’m
Stuck.
A prisoner to my
Mind.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 22 Jan 2011, 11:48 am

........ Whoa.

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Post by superdork11 on Sat 22 Jan 2011, 4:11 pm

So.... Did you like it?
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Post by Dreamer on Sat 22 Jan 2011, 11:20 pm

Ditto to Lauren. Whoa. <3 Fantastic!

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 23 Jan 2011, 9:46 am

Thanks.
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Post by Pipeman on Sun 23 Jan 2011, 11:02 am

An impressive portrayal of feelings we all encounter eventually, even if we deny it. The worst part of it is we either fight ourselves or succumb. :\ No matter which, a death of personality commences.
I am slightly disappointed that this poem is only 28 lines long, because next week in school I am to memorize a poem for reciting to my mother and possibly father, and the poem must be at least 30 lines in length. I was originally going to learn the Pacifist War Song by H.P. Lovecraft but perhaps not, seeing there are an amount of talented poets here!
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Post by superdork11 on Mon 24 Jan 2011, 8:17 am

Thanks, all of you. Maddie, I'm sorry I didn't ad two lines then.
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