Unseen Friend
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Unseen Friend
Hey, sorry, I seem to be posting more poetry than usual and feel like I'm clogging up the forum, but, hey, that hasn't stopped me yet.
I’m the one who
stands behind you,
I’m the one who
tells you to be brave,
I’m the one who
stays when everyone leaves,
I’m the one who
shows you how to live,
I’m the one who
watches through a window with bated breath,
I’m the one who
loves you unconditionally.
I’m you’re unseen friend.
I’m the one who
stands behind you,
I’m the one who
tells you to be brave,
I’m the one who
stays when everyone leaves,
I’m the one who
shows you how to live,
I’m the one who
watches through a window with bated breath,
I’m the one who
loves you unconditionally.
I’m you’re unseen friend.
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Re: Unseen Friend
Thanks, I just kinda felt in a poetry mood... And that happened.
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This porous forum may always borrow some acne potion if you clog it up too much -- but I don't believe you can clog pores with poetic musings and creative souls! -- besides, your contributions are respected, inspiring works in spite of their uncharacteristically depressed nature.
Schizophrenics anonymous? Or God? Hmm. . . one of the best parts of poetry is analyzing the meaning -- and it has a different meaning for the author and the reader. I thank you for your enigmatic works!
Schizophrenics anonymous? Or God? Hmm. . . one of the best parts of poetry is analyzing the meaning -- and it has a different meaning for the author and the reader. I thank you for your enigmatic works!
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Re: Unseen Friend
... Lovely metaphor, Maddie. xD But great poem, Eileen... It is causing me to ponder who you are talking about...
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*Agrees with Lauren* wonderful metaphor. XD Yeah, I'm not even sure who I was talking about...
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