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<Roses and Thornss>
Alright, so, I've decided to make another one But this one shall be very different.....
I yawned, stretching my arms far above my head. Today was Saturday, and my first day as a Hogwarts’ student.
“Good morning!” I said to the still sleeping Astoria. She didn’t move.
My stomach snarled, and I found myself starving. I desperately wanted food, but I had no idea where the dinning hall here was. Astoria would know, and she would be up soon, right? She had to be, or else we’d be late for morning classes.
Speaking of classes, I decided to check my schedule. That would buy Astoria a few more minutes before I woke her up. I traced my finger from where it was labled SATURDAY to where my classes should be. But Saturday was blank. Odd. Well, I thought to myself, perhaps you can choose your own schedule on Saturdays. In that case, I decided to choose my first class as Charms. They were so unique, and I loved learning them.
Five more minutes passes, and Astoria was still snoring. I’ll just have to change that, I thought smugly to myself. I walked over to Astoria, and prodded her sharply in the ribs.
Her snoring faltered, and her eyes flew open. “Oi! Bailey, wassa’matter?”
“Get up lazy bones! We’re going to be late to morning classes! Do you want that to happen?”
She gave a sleepy half-hearted chuckle. “We don’t have any classes on Saturday, silly,” she yawned loudly. “Go back to bed. But if you must stay up, Sapphire is an early-bird. She’ll be in the common room, if you want to go stay with her. But I must go back to sleep.”
I was wide-awake. There was no way I could go back to bed now. That was one problem I had with myself; once I was up, I was up-- there was no way I could go back to sleep now.
I decided to go to the common room to meet Sapphire, but I was suddenly nervous. I’d never met her before- what would she be like? Bailey! Get A hold of yourself! Get dresses, and get your butt down to the common room and meet Sapphire!
As usual, my mind won. With a mighty sigh, I stumbled over to my empty bags on the floor- Wait. Empty bags?! Where was all my stuff?!
I ran to Astoria and shook her until her eyes went from sleepy to angry. “Bailey, stop,” she said grumpily. “What’s your problem?”
“My stuff! Oh, Astoria, it’s all gone!” I wailed.
“Oh, please,” her voice was little more than a growl. “Ever heard of a dresser?”
“But…. I don’t understand. I never unpacked..”
“Honestly, are you even a witch? Ever heard of House Elves? They came in here in the middle of the night, and unpacked your stuff for you.”
We’d had house elves back in France; I don’t know why I’d never thought of it. Nerves, probably.
I turned around. Four massive dressers were lined up neatly against the green and silver striped walls. They had a color pattern- green, silver, green, silver.
On the first dresser, a green one, the letters AG were drawn on in silver curly letters. The second one, a silver had the same letter style, only in green. It read SJ. The third, was the same deal. It was green, with silver lettering, and read AP. The last was silver with green lettering, with the letters BN written on it. BN. Bailey Nichols.
I opened up the first drawer. There was all my underwear. That would be useful later.
The second drawer held all my shirts. The third one, my pants.
There were only two more drawers left. One held my towels, and toiletries, and the last was empty. I had nothing to put in it.
My hair things had all been neatly arranged on the top of the dresser- right next to a full sized mirror. Well, at least I could see what I looked like… all over.
As I was about to walk out the door, I realized that I was still in my P.J.’s. I’d never changed. Ha ha, whoops.
I walked back over to the dresser, and pulled a lilac colored t-shirt out of the second drawer. I tugged the tank top off over my head, and quickly pulled on the shirt.
I kicked off my shorts, and, quick as lightning, pulled on the jeans.
I walked over to the huge mirror, and took a look at myself. My wavy auburn hair shone in the sunlight. My bright green eyes shone with excitement, and adventure.
Here, I could wear whatever I wanted- under my robes, and within reason, of course. Back at France, we had to wear a hideous blue dress, with a silly little hat. I mean c’mon seriously?! A hat? Ugh, they were so prim and proper- almost the exact opposite as me. Maybe that was why I hated it so much…
Don’t let my petite figure fool you; I’m rough and tough, and my bruises and scars will tell you that. I’m not as fragile as I look.
Anyways, this was my favorite outfit. Maybe because it was the outfit Jacob had asked me to be his girlfriend in. Maybe it was because everyone said I looked “smoking hot” in it. I just loved it. The fitting purple shirt emphasizes my petite frame. The jeans looked nice. I think they really put the outfit together.
After I was done admiring my outfit, I pulled on black high-tops, and, for the first time noticed the soft carpet. It was green, with silver flecks. Shocker.
I back-tracked from last night, take a left, keep walking, turn right, go down the staircase, and you were in the common room. Two people were in it. One of them was Draco. The other was an average-heighted thin girl. Her face was absolutely beautiful. Her sparkling blue eyes were just like Astoria’s. Her long jet-black hair was silky, and had Sapphire colored high-lights. She reminded me a lot of Astoria. Wait! Sapphire….. Aha! That’s who this girl must be.
Anyways, her and Draco appeared to be arguing.
“If you break her heart,” Sapphire was snarling viciously. I was surprised she wasn’t foaming from the mouth. Yet. “I’ll break your arrogant little face!”
“Why do you even care? The last time I checked, you were not involved in this relationship!”
“She’s my best friend! Her business is practically mine!”
“Oh, well that’s just-”
“You know what I mean!” she snapped.
“How did you even find out I was planning to break up with her? You were ease dropping, weren’t you?” he accused.
“Um, well, maybe I wouldn’t know if you didn’t talk to yourself like a crazy person!” She said crazy like ca-razy.
“I think better when- And you‘re one to call me cra-” he broke of when he saw me. “Bailey,” he said. “This is Sapphire, one of your room mates- the crazy one- the others are Autumn and Astoria-”
“His soon-to-be ex-girlfriend,” Sapphire added sourly.
“Sapphire, lay off it. It’s my business if I break up with her. Not yours. Get that through your thick. Head!”
Sapphire sniffed. “Have you met Astoria or Autumn?”
“Actually yes. Well, just Astoria. She was awake when I got here last night,”
“Okay, good! You’ll like Autumn- she’s amazing. So sweet, and nice.” she paused, and raised her eyebrows, eyeing Draco. “And this here is just the opposite. This is Draco. Also Astoria’s boyfriend,”
“We actually already met when she came here last night, thank you very much,” Draco muttered.
“Wait a sec,” Sapphire said, her eyes going blank. “Bailey, what time did you get here last night?”
“Uh, I dunno. It was late. Er, or early depending on how you want to put it. My best guess would be 1:30,”
“And where did you meet Draco? Here in the Slytherin common room?” she pressed.
“No, he was walking behind me while I was still in the castle corridors.”
Something snapped inside Sapphire then. It was really strange. I didn’t really see what happened, but, from the looks of it, Draco tried to make an escape, but Sapphire sprinted after him, grabbed his arms, and began to shake him violently.
Draco grabbed her, and stopped her from giving him a concussion. “What were you doing?!” she shrieked. “All students are supposed to be in their dorms by nine! Tell me what you were doing now!”
Whoa. And her major malfunction was….? Then it hit me. There was something big, something HUGE that I didn’t know. Obviously, I wouldn’t know it, I just got here yesterday. But it had to do with Draco, and maybe Astoria or Sapphire. All I did know was that I desperately wanted to know what was going on.
Preface
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I knew that news would have spread over the school, long before I had arrived there. Apparently, this never happens there. Yet here, I can't think of a year where it hasn't. It makes me wonder that, if this mch is so different, what else will be? Yet I didn't have a choice as I left my home with my mother and sister. I didn't have any choice. I think that's what made me so angry. I hated not having a choice. I hated being told what to do. It seems like more and more people have been telling me what to do- no espically since my last days here were over. So now as mum tells us that we must throw everything away, everything that was once precious to us. Pictures, scrapbooks, broomsticks! If dad hadn't died at the factory, and we hadn't been given more money than we could imagine, maybe, just maybe nothing would've changed. Maybe Riley and I would still be best friends, maybe Jacob would still be my boyfriend, maybe Fawn, my older sister would still talk to me. But dad did die, and mum has decided that we must move away.
I could see how my first day at my new school would go: Fawn and Bailey Nichols moved from France. Two Beauxbatons going to Hogwarts.
Chapter 1
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"So, can you tell me a little bit about Slytherine?" I asked the Hogwarts headmaster Dumbledore. Fawn had been sorted into Ravenclaw. She had left to her common room long before; my beautiful sister had already made friends, leaving me here with the old guy.
"That is for you to find out. It shouldn't be hard for a fifth year," he smiled.
Great. I've already been through so much, and now all I know about Slytherin is it's name. "Uhh, right. So, this is the middle of the year- will anything be different?"
"Well, it may be difficult to find your classes, but I am sure you'll make friends right away. They'll show you around, as well. Oh, don't forget where the Slytherin common room is-"
How could I forget? He'd said it at least 40 freakin' times! "In the dungeons, I know, I know. So, can I go now?"
"Of course. Are you all set?" His eyes were kind.
"Yeah, I guess so. How do I get there, though?" I felt a little silly asking.
"The SLytherin common room? Take a left, keep going straight, then when you reack a dead end, take an immediate right. Anything else?"
"No. No, I think I'm good. What happens if I get lost?"
"I trust you, Bailey. You will not get lost. Now, I am sorry, but I have some very important business to take care of. Please ask one of our professors if you need anything," He turned around, and took a left- leaving me alone.
I walked straight- only to realize I should've turned left. I back tracked, then made the correct left turn. After walking for a few minutes, I got the feeling that I was being followed. I spun around. "Hello?" I called out.
"Uh, hi?" A tall thin blond boy was walking toward me. He stopped a few paces from me. His beautiful grey eyes bored into mine.
"Are you following me?" I challenged, my green eyes darting nervously.
"Um, no. I'm just going to the Slytherine-" He stopped. "What are you doing here? I've never seen you before..."
"I'm Bailey Nichols. I've just moved here from France. I used to be a Beauxbaton. I'm in Slytherine by the way,"
"Oh..... okay. I'm Draco. Draco Malfoy. Er, nice to meet you,"
"Yeah," I awkwardly turned around, and started walking a little to fast. My mind started racing. I had met a Slytherine! An incredibly hot Slytherine.... Jacob My mind told me. Jacob will never forget about you. You love him. He loves you- BAM! Well, there was that wall Dumbledore had talked about. I didn't realize I was on the ground until cool finger grasped mine, pulling me up.
"Are you okay?" It was him. Draco.
"Yeah. Er, when I get too lost in thought, I don't know what I'm doing.." I sounded incredibly pathetic.
He smiled revealing perfectly white straight teeth. "It's happened to me before too. There's a sudden right here," He pointed a long pale finger, "it's tricky to remember at first, but you'll get used to it,"
"Right," I said, and began to walk again.
Soon, I came to a large opening. Green and silver was everywhere. On the chairs, covering the fireplace, the rug..... It was beautiful. No one was in it. I must have come here pretty late.
"You came here pretty late," Draco observed.
I smiled. "Hey, I was just thinking that. What time is it?"
"It's 1:30. We need to get to bed, classes start pretty early. The girls dorm is over that way..." He pointed to the right.
It was then that I felt so stupid I couldn't thing straight. My bags! Where had I put all my stuff?!
"Bailey? What's wrong? You look as if you've seen a ghost- well, if you did it's fine. He's harmless-"
"No, I didn't! I've no idea where all my stuff is!"
"Oh! Dumbledore had it sent to your dorm. Astoria- my girlfriend-" he added proudly, "said a new girl would be coming soon. She's excited. You'll also be staying with Autumn and Sapphire. They're both nice,"
"Okay, thanks Draco. You're really helpful. Well, er, I guess I should be going now. See you in the morning?"
"Well, if we see eachother at breakfast- or in classes," he yawned. "I really should be going now. 'Night,"
"'Night," I said. I turned on my heel, and up a winding staircase where he said the girls' dorm was. I found the right room, with the label Dumbledore had given me. I opened the door, and someone screamed.
"She's here!" called a voice. "Hello, Bailey? My name's Astoria! I'll be your dormate. Er, we should probably be going to sleep now. It's rather late," She yawned, like Draco. "Sorry. I'm always so giddy when I wake up,"
That you are, I thought to myself. She was slightly annoying, but, she was tired. She crawled back into her bed, and was snoring soon after. Strange. Was she drunk? Yeahhh, probly
I found my bags on top of a neatly folded bed. I changed into my PJ's- tank top and short-shorts- and lay down under the covers. I closed my eyes, though I knew sleep would not come. Instead of thinking of sleep, I thought of Draco. He was gorgeous. But... he would never be mine. He would belong to the blonde beauty Astoria. Her sparkly blue eyes were like to beautiful pools of crystal clear water. Her curly bleach-blonde hair had been pulled back into a high ponytail. Who would dump her? No one in their right mind that is. I sighed. When I did fall asleep, I dreamed of Draco. There was no Astoria, and he loved me. I had never believed in any true-love-at-first-sight crap, but this was something different. It was like.... I dunno, but I could swear we were ment for eachother. Two halves, two counter parts. Jacob Jacob Jacob! my mind screamed. Draco Draco Draco! my heart screeched.
My dream continued, getting better and better. I woke up when he was about to pull me into yet another kiss.
I yawned, stretching my arms far above my head. Today was Saturday, and my first day as a Hogwarts’ student.
“Good morning!” I said to the still sleeping Astoria. She didn’t move.
My stomach snarled, and I found myself starving. I desperately wanted food, but I had no idea where the dinning hall here was. Astoria would know, and she would be up soon, right? She had to be, or else we’d be late for morning classes.
Speaking of classes, I decided to check my schedule. That would buy Astoria a few more minutes before I woke her up. I traced my finger from where it was labled SATURDAY to where my classes should be. But Saturday was blank. Odd. Well, I thought to myself, perhaps you can choose your own schedule on Saturdays. In that case, I decided to choose my first class as Charms. They were so unique, and I loved learning them.
Five more minutes passes, and Astoria was still snoring. I’ll just have to change that, I thought smugly to myself. I walked over to Astoria, and prodded her sharply in the ribs.
Her snoring faltered, and her eyes flew open. “Oi! Bailey, wassa’matter?”
“Get up lazy bones! We’re going to be late to morning classes! Do you want that to happen?”
She gave a sleepy half-hearted chuckle. “We don’t have any classes on Saturday, silly,” she yawned loudly. “Go back to bed. But if you must stay up, Sapphire is an early-bird. She’ll be in the common room, if you want to go stay with her. But I must go back to sleep.”
I was wide-awake. There was no way I could go back to bed now. That was one problem I had with myself; once I was up, I was up-- there was no way I could go back to sleep now.
I decided to go to the common room to meet Sapphire, but I was suddenly nervous. I’d never met her before- what would she be like? Bailey! Get A hold of yourself! Get dresses, and get your butt down to the common room and meet Sapphire!
As usual, my mind won. With a mighty sigh, I stumbled over to my empty bags on the floor- Wait. Empty bags?! Where was all my stuff?!
I ran to Astoria and shook her until her eyes went from sleepy to angry. “Bailey, stop,” she said grumpily. “What’s your problem?”
“My stuff! Oh, Astoria, it’s all gone!” I wailed.
“Oh, please,” her voice was little more than a growl. “Ever heard of a dresser?”
“But…. I don’t understand. I never unpacked..”
“Honestly, are you even a witch? Ever heard of House Elves? They came in here in the middle of the night, and unpacked your stuff for you.”
We’d had house elves back in France; I don’t know why I’d never thought of it. Nerves, probably.
I turned around. Four massive dressers were lined up neatly against the green and silver striped walls. They had a color pattern- green, silver, green, silver.
On the first dresser, a green one, the letters AG were drawn on in silver curly letters. The second one, a silver had the same letter style, only in green. It read SJ. The third, was the same deal. It was green, with silver lettering, and read AP. The last was silver with green lettering, with the letters BN written on it. BN. Bailey Nichols.
I opened up the first drawer. There was all my underwear. That would be useful later.
The second drawer held all my shirts. The third one, my pants.
There were only two more drawers left. One held my towels, and toiletries, and the last was empty. I had nothing to put in it.
My hair things had all been neatly arranged on the top of the dresser- right next to a full sized mirror. Well, at least I could see what I looked like… all over.
As I was about to walk out the door, I realized that I was still in my P.J.’s. I’d never changed. Ha ha, whoops.
I walked back over to the dresser, and pulled a lilac colored t-shirt out of the second drawer. I tugged the tank top off over my head, and quickly pulled on the shirt.
I kicked off my shorts, and, quick as lightning, pulled on the jeans.
I walked over to the huge mirror, and took a look at myself. My wavy auburn hair shone in the sunlight. My bright green eyes shone with excitement, and adventure.
Here, I could wear whatever I wanted- under my robes, and within reason, of course. Back at France, we had to wear a hideous blue dress, with a silly little hat. I mean c’mon seriously?! A hat? Ugh, they were so prim and proper- almost the exact opposite as me. Maybe that was why I hated it so much…
Don’t let my petite figure fool you; I’m rough and tough, and my bruises and scars will tell you that. I’m not as fragile as I look.
Anyways, this was my favorite outfit. Maybe because it was the outfit Jacob had asked me to be his girlfriend in. Maybe it was because everyone said I looked “smoking hot” in it. I just loved it. The fitting purple shirt emphasizes my petite frame. The jeans looked nice. I think they really put the outfit together.
After I was done admiring my outfit, I pulled on black high-tops, and, for the first time noticed the soft carpet. It was green, with silver flecks. Shocker.
I back-tracked from last night, take a left, keep walking, turn right, go down the staircase, and you were in the common room. Two people were in it. One of them was Draco. The other was an average-heighted thin girl. Her face was absolutely beautiful. Her sparkling blue eyes were just like Astoria’s. Her long jet-black hair was silky, and had Sapphire colored high-lights. She reminded me a lot of Astoria. Wait! Sapphire….. Aha! That’s who this girl must be.
Anyways, her and Draco appeared to be arguing.
“If you break her heart,” Sapphire was snarling viciously. I was surprised she wasn’t foaming from the mouth. Yet. “I’ll break your arrogant little face!”
“Why do you even care? The last time I checked, you were not involved in this relationship!”
“She’s my best friend! Her business is practically mine!”
“Oh, well that’s just-”
“You know what I mean!” she snapped.
“How did you even find out I was planning to break up with her? You were ease dropping, weren’t you?” he accused.
“Um, well, maybe I wouldn’t know if you didn’t talk to yourself like a crazy person!” She said crazy like ca-razy.
“I think better when- And you‘re one to call me cra-” he broke of when he saw me. “Bailey,” he said. “This is Sapphire, one of your room mates- the crazy one- the others are Autumn and Astoria-”
“His soon-to-be ex-girlfriend,” Sapphire added sourly.
“Sapphire, lay off it. It’s my business if I break up with her. Not yours. Get that through your thick. Head!”
Sapphire sniffed. “Have you met Astoria or Autumn?”
“Actually yes. Well, just Astoria. She was awake when I got here last night,”
“Okay, good! You’ll like Autumn- she’s amazing. So sweet, and nice.” she paused, and raised her eyebrows, eyeing Draco. “And this here is just the opposite. This is Draco. Also Astoria’s boyfriend,”
“We actually already met when she came here last night, thank you very much,” Draco muttered.
“Wait a sec,” Sapphire said, her eyes going blank. “Bailey, what time did you get here last night?”
“Uh, I dunno. It was late. Er, or early depending on how you want to put it. My best guess would be 1:30,”
“And where did you meet Draco? Here in the Slytherin common room?” she pressed.
“No, he was walking behind me while I was still in the castle corridors.”
Something snapped inside Sapphire then. It was really strange. I didn’t really see what happened, but, from the looks of it, Draco tried to make an escape, but Sapphire sprinted after him, grabbed his arms, and began to shake him violently.
Draco grabbed her, and stopped her from giving him a concussion. “What were you doing?!” she shrieked. “All students are supposed to be in their dorms by nine! Tell me what you were doing now!”
Whoa. And her major malfunction was….? Then it hit me. There was something big, something HUGE that I didn’t know. Obviously, I wouldn’t know it, I just got here yesterday. But it had to do with Draco, and maybe Astoria or Sapphire. All I did know was that I desperately wanted to know what was going on.
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OMG, this is sooo going to be awesome! I can't wait! Very different, and definitely interesting. (OMG, I got out of habit. That took me three tries...)
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Thank you! I was getting bored with Hermione, so, yeah
Yaay!
Yaay!
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Peggy, you are aware there is no "e" at the end of Slytherin, right? xD Other than that, nice beginning!
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Thanks!
Yeah... I think it's just a typo, because there's no "e" in the beginning
Yeah... I think it's just a typo, because there's no "e" in the beginning
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Hahha yeah, like every time you wrote Slytherin except for twice, you typed it as "Slytherine." Just making sure.
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You're right! I'll fix it. Thanks for telling me, I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise
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OMG, awesome! I like it a lot! Hehe, it's been so long since I've gotten a refreshing dose of Draco. Ahh, relief.
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YAYY!!!! I could use a nice overdose of Draco again. xD
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Thanks, guys! I shall be adding more soon..... no idea when, but soon!
YAAY!! Heartbeat was awesome!
YAAY!! Heartbeat was awesome!
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Cool, Peggy!(:
Thanks, guys!! I never updated that with the latest chapter, I'll go do that now.
Thanks, guys!! I never updated that with the latest chapter, I'll go do that now.
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Yay! I can't wait!
And Nadine, WRITE. MORE.
And Nadine, WRITE. MORE.
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Yes! We already have an angry mob going!
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I do like angry mobs
Chapter 2 is all written out, just gotta copy it onto word and post it here
Chapter 2 is all written out, just gotta copy it onto word and post it here
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WHEE! *joins angry mob* Lol, I still have one ambushing Pansy, stalking the WI Mods, and stalking Harry. xD
Yay!
EDIT: Awesome! But like, dun dun dun dun! all at the same time. xD
Yay!
EDIT: Awesome! But like, dun dun dun dun! all at the same time. xD
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There's nothing wrong with that
That was onkly half the chapter.... my dad wanted the computer, so I decided to post half of it, and leave you in suspense
That was onkly half the chapter.... my dad wanted the computer, so I decided to post half of it, and leave you in suspense
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YAY MOBS!! xD We also have one stalking Ricky, for no good reason. (:
Oooh, interesting..
Oooh, interesting..
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Nothing wrong with that either xD
Yeah, I'm almost finished typing it
Yeah, I'm almost finished typing it
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Lol, we're ridiculous.
YAY! *mobs you*
YAY! *mobs you*
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Nothing wrong with THAt either. (Geez, I feel like that's all I've been saying )
Ow! It's up, it's up!
Ow! It's up, it's up!
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Noting wrong with that. xD
YAY! Ooh, that was totally AWESOME! I laughed out loud at this line, "I pulled on black high-tops, and, for the first time noticed the soft carpet. It was green, with silver flecks. Shocker." xDD I don't know why, but it made me burst into a fit of hysterical laughter. Thank banana muffins nobody was in the room except my puppy.
YAY! Ooh, that was totally AWESOME! I laughed out loud at this line, "I pulled on black high-tops, and, for the first time noticed the soft carpet. It was green, with silver flecks. Shocker." xDD I don't know why, but it made me burst into a fit of hysterical laughter. Thank banana muffins nobody was in the room except my puppy.
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