Invisible
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Invisible
Eyes bore straight through me,
Not pausing to question my cloak of darkness.
They gaze uncomprehendingly
Through my heart, and past my soul,
Wondering what they noticed.
What caused the ripple in reality?
My friend, my friend.
That was me, you just saw.
My body that is both there and not,
A reality, and a fantasy,
Hidden by your own acceptance
Of my non-being.
I do not belong to this world,
But somewhere else.
Somewhere else where I can
Throw my veil and mask
Of smiles and laughter to the wind.
Where I can break down, and
All are welcome to see me.
Somewhere else where I matter.
Where somebody cares.
Where somebody is willing
To take the time, and piece me
Back together again, so that
I might be whole.
Somewhere else where I
Am no longer allowed to be
Invisible.
Not pausing to question my cloak of darkness.
They gaze uncomprehendingly
Through my heart, and past my soul,
Wondering what they noticed.
What caused the ripple in reality?
My friend, my friend.
That was me, you just saw.
My body that is both there and not,
A reality, and a fantasy,
Hidden by your own acceptance
Of my non-being.
I do not belong to this world,
But somewhere else.
Somewhere else where I can
Throw my veil and mask
Of smiles and laughter to the wind.
Where I can break down, and
All are welcome to see me.
Somewhere else where I matter.
Where somebody cares.
Where somebody is willing
To take the time, and piece me
Back together again, so that
I might be whole.
Somewhere else where I
Am no longer allowed to be
Invisible.
Tolly12bells- Rising Star 2
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Re: Invisible
Simply stupendous! It can be difficult to produce poetry that doesn't rhyme and still retain a melancholic chime. I honestly did not intend for that to rhyme, however. . . .Giggles McGee wrote:"Throw my veil and mask
Of smiles and laughter to the wind."
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Re: Invisible
"Giggles McGee?" xD Well, thanks anyway, guys. Don't know where that came from. I literally typed it for the first time in the window to post it...
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Re: Invisible
That was really good, Lauren, *Agrees with Nadine and Maddie*
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