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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 23 Jan 2011, 6:18 pm

Eyes bore straight through me,
Not pausing to question my cloak of darkness.
They gaze uncomprehendingly
Through my heart, and past my soul,
Wondering what they noticed.
What caused the ripple in reality?
My friend, my friend.
That was me, you just saw.
My body that is both there and not,
A reality, and a fantasy,
Hidden by your own acceptance
Of my non-being.
I do not belong to this world,
But somewhere else.
Somewhere else where I can
Throw my veil and mask
Of smiles and laughter to the wind.
Where I can break down, and
All are welcome to see me.
Somewhere else where I matter.
Where somebody cares.
Where somebody is willing
To take the time, and piece me
Back together again, so that
I might be whole.
Somewhere else where I
Am no longer allowed to be
Invisible.

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Re: Invisible

Post by Pipeman on Sun 23 Jan 2011, 8:32 pm

Giggles McGee wrote:"Throw my veil and mask
Of smiles and laughter to the wind."
Simply stupendous! It can be difficult to produce poetry that doesn't rhyme and still retain a melancholic chime. I honestly did not intend for that to rhyme, however. . . .
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Re: Invisible

Post by Dreamer on Sun 23 Jan 2011, 9:33 pm

I agree with Maddie! That was really stunning, Lauren. *applause*

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Re: Invisible

Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 24 Jan 2011, 12:24 am

"Giggles McGee?" xD Well, thanks anyway, guys. Smiley Don't know where that came from. I literally typed it for the first time in the window to post it...

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Re: Invisible

Post by superdork11 on Mon 24 Jan 2011, 8:22 am

That was really good, Lauren, *Agrees with Nadine and Maddie*
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