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Mark This Moment

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Mark This Moment

Post by Dreamer on Thu 03 Feb 2011, 12:16 am

My stomach does cartwheels
as you whisper to me
your warm breath tickling my ear.
But the words you utter
so flawlessly, so calmly
still my racing heart.
I turn to stare into
your orbs of crystal green
looking hazel today, sadder.
And in that infinite moment
as all my senses combust
I realize something profound.
I want to swallow your pain
and make it mine.
And this brand of selflessness
comes only with love.

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Re: Mark This Moment

Post by superdork11 on Thu 03 Feb 2011, 8:21 am

Wow. That was really good.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 03 Feb 2011, 11:24 am

So sad... But so good...

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Post by summer on Thu 03 Feb 2011, 12:54 pm

Aw that was great.
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Post by Dreamer on Thu 03 Feb 2011, 9:10 pm

Thank you guys(: It was that moment that I realized that I truly love him, so I felt the need to document it. Sorry, that sounded corny. >.<

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Post by superdork11 on Fri 04 Feb 2011, 8:19 am

It's alright, you know we don't care if it's corny or not.
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