Mark This Moment
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Mark This Moment
My stomach does cartwheels
as you whisper to me
your warm breath tickling my ear.
But the words you utter
so flawlessly, so calmly
still my racing heart.
I turn to stare into
your orbs of crystal green
looking hazel today, sadder.
And in that infinite moment
as all my senses combust
I realize something profound.
I want to swallow your pain
and make it mine.
And this brand of selflessness
comes only with love.
as you whisper to me
your warm breath tickling my ear.
But the words you utter
so flawlessly, so calmly
still my racing heart.
I turn to stare into
your orbs of crystal green
looking hazel today, sadder.
And in that infinite moment
as all my senses combust
I realize something profound.
I want to swallow your pain
and make it mine.
And this brand of selflessness
comes only with love.
Re: Mark This Moment
Wow. That was really good.
superdork11- Rising Star 1
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So sad... But so good...
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Aw that was great.
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Thank you guys(: It was that moment that I realized that I truly love him, so I felt the need to document it. Sorry, that sounded corny. >.<
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It's alright, you know we don't care if it's corny or not.
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