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Dear Mr. Death

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Dear Mr. Death

Post by Music Is Love on Thu 14 Apr 2011, 7:59 am

Dear Mr. Death, I hope this finds you well
Only I am writing, the others are visiting hell
Not only am I weak, but sad and dying too
Three days until I pass, I'm sure to see you soon

Let it not be slow, I wish it to be quick
Not gun, not blade, but poison- shall I get to pick
But sir, if you could, disregard that I am dying
You could say that I held on- but surely, that'd be lying

You are not afraid of me as I may be of you
But I musn't be this calm, it's as if I do not have a clue
Though I shall carry on, through this cloud of looming death
Dear, you shall no longer miss me, you will finally be allowed to rest

And my dear Mr. Death, won't you be so kind
As to clean up the mess I made while I leave this world behind
You see, my life was tragic, a story with no name
I felt the pain of lust, but only I was to blame

Three days have gone and past, my life has threw me by
Surely I will miss it, if I ever have the time
Dear, I feel no different, this body seems the same
Even though life has left me, I am still a part of your games

Dear Mr. Death, I hope this finds you well
I think that you'll be proud of me- I'm now writing this from hell
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Re: Dear Mr. Death

Post by superdork11 on Thu 14 Apr 2011, 8:25 am

Wow.
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Re: Dear Mr. Death

Post by OOPSiSLIPPED on Thu 14 Apr 2011, 12:57 pm

Love it. Exclamation

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Re: Dear Mr. Death

Post by PeggySnow on Thu 14 Apr 2011, 3:32 pm

I love it, Katie. Smiley

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Re: Dear Mr. Death

Post by Tolly12bells on Fri 15 Apr 2011, 1:00 am

Whooaaa. Really really really good... O.o (Skill with your rhyming, by the way)

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Re: Dear Mr. Death

Post by superdork11 on Fri 15 Apr 2011, 8:28 am

Yeah, that's really impressive.
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