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Post by Tolly12bells on Tue 17 May 2011, 11:03 pm

Lost

Roaming in darkness
Shadowed from light
The only thought arising
To escape from this plight

Arms straight outstretched
Searching for the feel
Of somebody else
Who can help me to heal

Isolated and lonely
Just desiring a friend
Blind to all emotions
Yearning for the end

Everything in me
All I feel is numb
Emptiness, blankness
A deep, buzzing hum

Not sad, not happy
No emotion at all
These strong walls I've built?
They're starting to fall

Cascading and tumbling
Brick after brick
Down plunge the walls
Fire's final lick

My empire's crumbling
Glass covers the ground
Through all the chaos,
One prevalent sound

A cry out for help
To be saved from inside
It used to be somewhere
Which was safe to hide

Sequestered from the world
Concealed by a cloak
Still trying to escape
Lost in the smoke

Calling out for a friend
Needing your help
Along with losing you
Now, I've lost myself

Circling around
Completely aimless
Searching for the end
But still wrapped in the mist

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Re: Lost

Post by superdork11 on Wed 18 May 2011, 8:19 pm

Second time I've read that, and still. o.O
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Post by PeggySnow on Wed 18 May 2011, 9:35 pm

Wow.. That was.. Beautiful. And haunting. I loved everything about it. It was just... Wow..

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Post by superdork11 on Wed 18 May 2011, 9:35 pm

It was really good. Smile
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Post by superdork11 on Wed 18 May 2011, 9:41 pm

Yeah, a little bit.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Wed 18 May 2011, 9:42 pm

Thanks... Smiley Glad to... haunt/intrigue you...

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Post by superdork11 on Wed 18 May 2011, 9:43 pm

It was good.
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