Lost
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Lost
Lost
Roaming in darkness
Shadowed from light
The only thought arising
To escape from this plight
Arms straight outstretched
Searching for the feel
Of somebody else
Who can help me to heal
Isolated and lonely
Just desiring a friend
Blind to all emotions
Yearning for the end
Everything in me
All I feel is numb
Emptiness, blankness
A deep, buzzing hum
Not sad, not happy
No emotion at all
These strong walls I've built?
They're starting to fall
Cascading and tumbling
Brick after brick
Down plunge the walls
Fire's final lick
My empire's crumbling
Glass covers the ground
Through all the chaos,
One prevalent sound
A cry out for help
To be saved from inside
It used to be somewhere
Which was safe to hide
Sequestered from the world
Concealed by a cloak
Still trying to escape
Lost in the smoke
Calling out for a friend
Needing your help
Along with losing you
Now, I've lost myself
Circling around
Completely aimless
Searching for the end
But still wrapped in the mist
Roaming in darkness
Shadowed from light
The only thought arising
To escape from this plight
Arms straight outstretched
Searching for the feel
Of somebody else
Who can help me to heal
Isolated and lonely
Just desiring a friend
Blind to all emotions
Yearning for the end
Everything in me
All I feel is numb
Emptiness, blankness
A deep, buzzing hum
Not sad, not happy
No emotion at all
These strong walls I've built?
They're starting to fall
Cascading and tumbling
Brick after brick
Down plunge the walls
Fire's final lick
My empire's crumbling
Glass covers the ground
Through all the chaos,
One prevalent sound
A cry out for help
To be saved from inside
It used to be somewhere
Which was safe to hide
Sequestered from the world
Concealed by a cloak
Still trying to escape
Lost in the smoke
Calling out for a friend
Needing your help
Along with losing you
Now, I've lost myself
Circling around
Completely aimless
Searching for the end
But still wrapped in the mist
Tolly12bells- Rising Star 2
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Re: Lost
Second time I've read that, and still. o.O
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Re: Lost
Wow.. That was.. Beautiful. And haunting. I loved everything about it. It was just... Wow..
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Re: Lost
It was really good.
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Re: Lost
Yeah, a little bit.
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Re: Lost
Thanks... Glad to... haunt/intrigue you...
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Re: Lost
It was good.
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