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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 04 Aug 2011, 11:55 pm

So, I got really down on myself at like, 2 in the morning the other day... And this happened:

FAIL

F for the frustration and pain that I face
A is for always will be second place
I is for I'll never be the one to shine
L is for love that can never be mine

Falling and falling down into despair
Angled just so that I'm beyond repair
If I made a difference, I cannot see it
Lying below, in this dark, endless pit

Finding someone who changes my life
All fingers crossed for the end of the strife
I make one slip-up, cause myself pain,
Losing myself all over again

Feels like a disease that's spreading about
And the first symptom is a disappointed pout
I try to believe that they'll find a cure
Like all I'll ever be isn't a failure


Spoiler:
I'm not sure if you all caught this... Go back and look at the first letter of each line. (I can't tell you how clever I felt, even though I was depressed when I wrote this.)

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Re: FAIL

Post by Pipeman on Sat 06 Aug 2011, 9:09 pm

Nevermind your bloated ego and wilted emotional state during composition of this FAIL poem! It has turned out to not be a FAIL at all!! Everybody loathes their putrid brains bombarding them with melancholic chemicals drunken
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Re: FAIL

Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 07 Aug 2011, 3:45 pm

... *Runs to a dictionary* ... Thank you, Maddie! xD

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Re: FAIL

Post by superdork11 on Mon 08 Aug 2011, 8:54 am

Second time I read that, and o.O *Mind blown*
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 08 Aug 2011, 3:55 pm

Thanks. I take mind blowing as a good thing.

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Re: FAIL

Post by superdork11 on Mon 08 Aug 2011, 7:02 pm

Yes, 'tis.
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