FAIL
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FAIL
So, I got really down on myself at like, 2 in the morning the other day... And this happened:
FAIL
F for the frustration and pain that I face
A is for always will be second place
I is for I'll never be the one to shine
L is for love that can never be mine
Falling and falling down into despair
Angled just so that I'm beyond repair
If I made a difference, I cannot see it
Lying below, in this dark, endless pit
Finding someone who changes my life
All fingers crossed for the end of the strife
I make one slip-up, cause myself pain,
Losing myself all over again
Feels like a disease that's spreading about
And the first symptom is a disappointed pout
I try to believe that they'll find a cure
Like all I'll ever be isn't a failure
FAIL
F for the frustration and pain that I face
A is for always will be second place
I is for I'll never be the one to shine
L is for love that can never be mine
Falling and falling down into despair
Angled just so that I'm beyond repair
If I made a difference, I cannot see it
Lying below, in this dark, endless pit
Finding someone who changes my life
All fingers crossed for the end of the strife
I make one slip-up, cause myself pain,
Losing myself all over again
Feels like a disease that's spreading about
And the first symptom is a disappointed pout
I try to believe that they'll find a cure
Like all I'll ever be isn't a failure
- Spoiler:
- I'm not sure if you all caught this... Go back and look at the first letter of each line. (I can't tell you how clever I felt, even though I was depressed when I wrote this.)
Tolly12bells- Rising Star 2
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Re: FAIL
Nevermind your bloated ego and wilted emotional state during composition of this FAIL poem! It has turned out to not be a FAIL at all!! Everybody loathes their putrid brains bombarding them with melancholic chemicals
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Re: FAIL
... *Runs to a dictionary* ... Thank you, Maddie! xD
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Re: FAIL
Second time I read that, and o.O *Mind blown*
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Re: FAIL
Thanks. I take mind blowing as a good thing.
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Re: FAIL
Yes, 'tis.
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