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dead, dead, hollywood dead.

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Post by Fallen Archangel Thu 25 Aug 2011, 3:18 am

This is about two months old, now. Buuuuut, still enjoy.

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friend of mine, gorgeous you say,
light overhead, bright sky of day.
night come forth, don't delay,
bestow the dark, come time to betray.

by a hand to lay, pointed knife,
no time ahead, no time for life.
pass the blade, fall forth the head,
dead, dead, you're hollywood dead.

downfall the body, useless being,
eyes gorged out, beauty unseeing.
brave the darkness, where you must remain,
worry not darling, you'll be far from pain.

fall in your grace, by your bed,
follow the path, to which you were led.
down in a puddle, of scarlet red,
dead, dead, you're hollywood dead.
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Post by Tolly12bells Thu 25 Aug 2011, 1:13 pm

Mia! I haven't seen you in ages! Silly

Now, your poem... Whoa. It's incredible, and dark, and outstandingly haunting... O.o
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Post by superdork11 Thu 25 Aug 2011, 1:24 pm

That's an amazingly incredible/haunting poem, as Lauren said.
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