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Recent poems

Post by superdork11 on Sun 25 Sep 2011, 12:43 pm

I wrote these all on our class trip, and they're all kinda bad, but there's really no point in posting these here, because Lauren's already read them all... And no one else comes online, because the site is dead. So.... xD Here we go:




The way you see yourself isn’t
The way people see you.

Oh, look, I want to hug him.
Oh, boy, what’s she gonna do this time?

Look, there she’s brushing his arm.
Look, here, I’m talking to him.

But isn’t this what everyone’s like?
How on Earth can she be so creepy?

I don’t get what I’m doing wrong.
Is she doing this on purpose.

I can’t change without knowing.
Could she just leave me alone?

So now I’m here,
Talking to you,
Praying you’ll tell me
What I should do.





Disappointment,
That’s what I am,
I’m dealing with life
The best that I can.

To my friends
I’m second best,
To those who don’t know me,
Someone to detest.

Too stunned to come up
With the words I speak,
The ones playing in my head
“God, what a freak”.

I need you to
Understand what I mean,
To me life is harder
Then it may seem.

I spend all my time
Trying for you,
Love you to death,
But what can I do?

You seem like you hate me,
You wouldn’t be wrong,
Life’s never as simple
As said in a song.

You say that I’m creepy,
You’re probably right,
If that’s so true,
I won’t last the night.

I’m sorry I’m bad
At being what you want,
Just please don’t leave
Me to my minds haunts.

Left alone I won’t deal,
Won’t do what I need,
In order to make it
I’m begging you please.

Please tell me that
You care about me,
And let these thoughts
I’m thinking go free.

Stop me from wondering
About what you think,
If ever you need me,
I’m there in a blink.

But would you do that?
Would you be there?
I don’t think so,
But how is that fair?

I give you my heart,
Get half of yours back,
Keeping me longing for
The affection you lack.

So I’ll try to be normal,
It can’t be too hard,
To be what’s expected,
Let down my guard.

All I’m saying is
To do what you do,
And I’ll do my best,
‘Cause I love you.




I try to be social,
Not push people away,
I come outside,
Ready to play.

As soon as I’m there,
I hide in my shell,
I’m not really shy,
But people can’t tell.

I try to laugh,
Try to be happy,
So hard to do
When I’m feeling crappy.

That line was so cheesy,
Best I could do,
You know it’s not easy
When I’m thinking of you.

Why is it that everything
Goes back to you?
So caught up in the
Things you do.

I try to impress everyone
By not caring at all,
The higher you build it all up,
The further you fall.

But now I’m trapped,
Can’t tell, can’t not.
How can I win
These battles I’ve fought?




Everyone’s so fake,
One moment “God damn
I hate her!” The next
A hug and a laugh
And a joke shared
Between.
Pretending to be
Whole hearted,
But using it
To fuel the fire.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 25 Sep 2011, 2:16 pm

Ah, yes, I've read these already, but they're so good. <3

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 25 Sep 2011, 9:59 pm

Smile They don't have a lot of poeticness to them... It vaguely frustrates me... xD
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 26 Sep 2011, 12:09 am

Yeah, that's kind of annoying. And we need more people online, because we've both read each others' stuff. xD

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 26 Sep 2011, 8:54 am

I know... It's like... Where is everyone?! Gah...
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 26 Sep 2011, 9:12 pm

'Tis depressing...

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Post by superdork11 on Tue 27 Sep 2011, 9:31 am

It is....
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