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Sunken and Sad

Post by superdork11 on Mon 12 Mar 2012, 2:06 pm

Well, I haven't really written anything lately, but I found this from the beginning of the year, and thought I'd share, so if someone were to come online, there would be some activity.



"I'll get off to a good start,"
I promise myself,
Then I end up in tears,
Well, that didn't work.

So disappointed,
Everything's off.
Everyone's happy,
Just where'd I go wrong?

I have no control
Over my life,
How do I function
When I don't have power?

So frustrated
With everyone around me.
Just leave me alone!
But, really don't.

I need people here
More than anything right now,
To make me feel loved,
Or simply wanted.

To be accepted,
Not overlooked,
Considered a person,
Someone to like.

I can't deal with change,
Was flying so high,
Two simple things,
And I crashed to the ground.

I was floating on air,
Radiating joy,
Then it all changed,
Sunken and sad.
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Re: Sunken and Sad

Post by Tolly12bells on Tue 13 Mar 2012, 12:39 am

... Sad Very sad... Sad

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Post by superdork11 on Wed 14 Mar 2012, 2:40 am

Yeah.... I can't remember when I wrote it, though....
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 15 Mar 2012, 5:06 am

To me it sounds like right at the beginning of high school. Right when we were all struggling with the transition.

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 15 Mar 2012, 1:28 pm

I dunno... I'm trying to figure out what the two things were. I think it may have been shortly after Kanab....
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 18 Mar 2012, 10:42 pm

Ahaa... Could this have been one of the two you wrote while IN Kanab?

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 19 Mar 2012, 8:58 am

No, I don't think so, 'cause I remember writing it in Math and Spanish. And it wasn't in my Kanab notebook. Hm.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 19 Mar 2012, 11:06 pm

Hmm... I wonder what you were thinking about at the time, because usually a poem is spurred on by a specific event or thought process...

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Post by superdork11 on Tue 20 Mar 2012, 8:31 am

I know... I can't remember, that's unfortunate. Hm.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 22 Mar 2012, 1:07 am

It is... Still a good poem, though.

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Re: Sunken and Sad

Post by superdork11 on Mon 26 Mar 2012, 9:22 pm

Yes, hm. Yeah, thanks. Smile
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Re: Sunken and Sad

Post by summer on Tue 03 Apr 2012, 2:52 pm

Thats such a sad poem but its really well described and written
well.
Well done Nod
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Post by superdork11 on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:19 pm

Thanks. Smile
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