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Random poem that doesn't have a name

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Random poem that doesn't have a name

Post by superdork11 on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:23 pm

Okay, I have no clue where I got the motivation for this, and I had to look up words for the last line, saw that word, and was like, "THIS IS PERFECT!" So, enjoy.


Want you to hold me
Alone in the dark
Nothing but silence
Together we lie

Love from the shadows
Only your body, your
Voice in the night
Everything to me

Life in the moment
I must hold you near
Forever and always
Each day we survive

Hope in your embrace
On go the days
Pressing emotions
Ephemeral love
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:25 pm

... Whoa. And the awesome acronym, too. It's kind of depressing, though, too. But I like it.

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:30 pm

Thank you. I just wrote it, got a random inspiration and was like, "Notebook! I need you!" I don't really know what I was trying to say... I like it, though.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:31 pm

So do I. It's very deep.

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:32 pm

It is... I'm still trying to figure it out, which is cool, I don't often stump myself.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:37 pm

xD I'd hope not...

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:38 pm

That would be frustrating.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:42 pm

Indeed... "I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT'S HAPPENING IN MY BRAIN!"

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 05 Apr 2012, 10:54 pm

Yep. And those times are frustrating.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 09 Apr 2012, 10:32 pm

Very much so... Because no matter what you do, you can't figure out what you're thinking or what you're feeling.

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 16 Apr 2012, 3:06 pm

Exactly.
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Re: Random poem that doesn't have a name

Post by Bela Kiss on Sun 22 Apr 2012, 4:05 pm

Ha ha! Even I had to look up the definition of "ephemeral." What could your brain possibly be striving toward? Worldwide infamy in evoking teen angst everywhere! Smile Your poetry proceeds.
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Post by superdork11 on Sun 22 Apr 2012, 7:42 pm

Yeah. xD Thanks.
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