A Hug
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A Hug
This is also on the front page of the Crusher's Club, but I'm putting it here because it's very poetic. Me and Lauren both were trying to explain one of those incredible, perfect hugs you get from him. I combined both of them and here is the finished product.
There's just something that's almost like a sixth sense. You know when it's coming, and suddenly, your other five seem to be burning with the intensity of the sun. You can feel your heart start to race a few seconds before it happens, and then, if it's at all unexpected, you can feel the significant other go tense in your arms, then relax. You lean your head on his shoulder and savor the feeling of this moment. And when combined as one, you can feel him smiling. You recognize the way his hair tickles your face and neck, and, you love the way you can feel the heat coming off him, almost as if he's blushing. You feel his chest rising and falling slowly against you. And the moment could last for three seconds, or twenty, and you wouldn't know the difference, because the first few nanoseconds seem to stretch out an eternity. You wouldn't mind this moment lasting forever. You can feel his shirt wrinkling up on the shoulders, and the way his shoulder blades move beneath your fingers as he adjusts to make it even better. You're very aware, and very pleased that his hand is on the nape of your neck. A inexplicable sensation is zipping through you, straight to the tips of your toes. You feel so... at peace. You're completely oblivious to the rest of the world. All that matters is him and being in his arms.
[Cowritten by Dreamer and Tolly12bells]
There's just something that's almost like a sixth sense. You know when it's coming, and suddenly, your other five seem to be burning with the intensity of the sun. You can feel your heart start to race a few seconds before it happens, and then, if it's at all unexpected, you can feel the significant other go tense in your arms, then relax. You lean your head on his shoulder and savor the feeling of this moment. And when combined as one, you can feel him smiling. You recognize the way his hair tickles your face and neck, and, you love the way you can feel the heat coming off him, almost as if he's blushing. You feel his chest rising and falling slowly against you. And the moment could last for three seconds, or twenty, and you wouldn't know the difference, because the first few nanoseconds seem to stretch out an eternity. You wouldn't mind this moment lasting forever. You can feel his shirt wrinkling up on the shoulders, and the way his shoulder blades move beneath your fingers as he adjusts to make it even better. You're very aware, and very pleased that his hand is on the nape of your neck. A inexplicable sensation is zipping through you, straight to the tips of your toes. You feel so... at peace. You're completely oblivious to the rest of the world. All that matters is him and being in his arms.
[Cowritten by Dreamer and Tolly12bells]
Last edited by Dreamer ♥ on Wed 06 Jan 2010, 5:42 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: A Hug
Ooh, very nice... Thanks for the credit too. I saw the title, and was like, Oh... I know what this is about. (Draco smiley!)
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Yep. I like it though... *dreamy*
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I ended up under Laurence. xD The guys smoothed out a circle in the snow that's really slick, and we were standing, and Megan decided to try to make us kiss again, so she pushed him towards me. We collided and I lost my balance from the snow, and accidentally knocked Laurence's legs out from under him, so we ended in a pile in the snow. xD
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It happens more often than natural. xD With my bad balance and his seemingly constant urge to tackle me, the ground is where we spend the majority of our time. xD Then I epically failed too. He and Eileen were cat-fighting, so I went to poke both of them in the stomach, slipped, both feet came off the ground and I landed on my back.
Laurence was so cute. He's like, "That was the best epic fail I've ever seen." xD
Laurence was so cute. He's like, "That was the best epic fail I've ever seen." xD
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He confuses me though, because it's like, I don't know if he was trying to be sweet, or if he was laughing because I managed to fall right on my butt. xD
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Yeah, well, it sounds to me like a little bit of both. xD Like he was laughing at you but trying to be sweet and not insulting at the same time.
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Yeah. xD He does that a lot. I like it though, because I know half the things I do are laughable, and should be laughed at. xD
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xD Yup, you're definitely a funny person.
Did I spell definitely right this time? *crosses fingers*
Did I spell definitely right this time? *crosses fingers*
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Not necessarily, I just screw up a lot. xD
Indeed you did! *applause*
Indeed you did! *applause*
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