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Wish for a Fairy Tale

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Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 7:31 pm

Alright, a quick explanation: I thought it would be cool to use popular reference points, such as a small town girl and city boy, etc, to write a poem. Here's my best shot.

Yes, I am a small town girl
Living here, in my lonely world
Wishing life could work out
Just like a song
So that I
Don't Stop Believin'
And I'm waiting for you,
City Boy,
To get on a midnight train
So we can live out
Our happily ever after.
Yes, Prince Charming,
I want my life
To turn out like a fairy tale,
But without, "The End"
Because I never really want
My happily ever after dream
To come to a close
I want it to
Go on and on and on and on...

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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Dreamer on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 7:35 pm

WIN!! That's great Lauren! (:

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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by superdork11 on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 7:43 pm

Wow, nice! That's awesome! I like the end, it goes on and on and on and on!
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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 8:15 pm

Thanks you guys. Smiley I don't know if it helps that I wrote it at 11:30 or something. xD

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 8:19 pm

Nice, I always write better in the morning/evening.
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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 8:35 pm

Evening for me.

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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by superdork11 on Mon 29 Mar 2010, 8:39 pm

Nice.
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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Dreamer on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 12:34 pm

I write my best... whenever. When I'm inspired. Eye Roll

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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Tolly12bells on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 9:11 pm

For me, nighttime inspires me most. The stars, the moon, the darkness, the peace. I dunno. I do really well at night. And not, like, 8:30. I mean NIGHT NIGHT: As in 12:30-2:30.

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Post by superdork11 on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 10:21 pm

Yeah, nice.... night night.... wow Lauren.
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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Tolly12bells on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 10:26 pm

Sorry. I got used to repeating words for emphasis. After last night... (I said like-like a lot...) So night night was sorta the first thing that came to mind.

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Post by superdork11 on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 10:31 pm

Okay, I'm not complaining. I just thought it was funny.
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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by Tolly12bells on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 10:34 pm

Haha, I know. I reread it, and it sounded pretty funny too, but not just night, NIGHT-night. xD

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Re: Wish for a Fairy Tale

Post by superdork11 on Tue 30 Mar 2010, 10:37 pm

I know! Wow.
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