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Post by Music Is Love Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:19 pm

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Have you ever wondered what life would be like if you didn't have a heart? If you couldn't feel? If ever emotion you ever had just disappeared? Ever thought about it? Or, what if you had no memories? Everything you remembered- gone? Your entire past faded into nothing. Leaving you with only today and the future. What would you do if that happened? Would you move on with life, glad to be rid of everything? Or would you become to overwhelmed, and yearn for a heart with which to love, and to be happy. Would the demise of your heart haunt you, until you begin to fade away with your past, crying out for someone to save you? What if no one did? What if?
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Post by OOPSiSLIPPED Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:34 pm

Wow, nice ! Very deep thoughts that definitely got me thinking.
This reminds me of an old movie, or maybe a Twilight Zone episode where the people didn't have any emotions.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:36 pm

Nice job! (: Very deep.
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Post by Music Is Love Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:37 pm

Thank you! ^.^
Well, I mostly got my inspiration from Kingdom Hearts, in which the people, Nobodies, don't have hearts, and thus cannot feel emotions. (Off topic, but I love your signature :3 Near ♥)
Thanks, Nadine. (:
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Post by OOPSiSLIPPED Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:42 pm

Cool !
(Near is da best Razz)
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Post by Music Is Love Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:44 pm

Yeah. I was playing it, and i just suddenly got into to one of those really creative modes, and well... yeah. xD
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Post by OOPSiSLIPPED Sat 21 Aug 2010, 9:51 pm

Nice Razz . I have one Kingdom Hearts game but it's really old. It's for gameboy Lol.
(Okay, okay, that's true xDD. But Near wins the gold medal for best toys and... being better than Mello X.x)
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Post by Music Is Love Sat 21 Aug 2010, 10:19 pm

Oh, wow. xD I have one for the DS lol
(Oh, yes. Defiantly! xD)
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Post by superdork11 Sun 22 Aug 2010, 10:29 am

Oh man, that was amazingly deep, and thought producing.
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 22 Aug 2010, 4:10 pm

I liked that. Made me think more than I usually do. (Loooovee your siggie, Nadine, and Eileen. xD)
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Post by superdork11 Mon 23 Aug 2010, 12:16 am

It made me think too. Very thought provoking. (Thanks. xD)
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Post by Music Is Love Tue 24 Aug 2010, 4:23 pm

Thank you both. ^.^
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Post by superdork11 Tue 24 Aug 2010, 9:34 pm

'S'welcome. I don't know, that's fun to say.
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Post by summer Sat 28 Aug 2010, 12:56 pm

I like that poem it's great.
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Post by Music Is Love Sat 28 Aug 2010, 9:10 pm

Thanks, Summer. (:
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