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Falling Again

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Post by Dreamer Fri 27 Aug 2010, 1:07 pm

Falling Again

Thought I second-guess my decisions
I know what I feel is true
In this world of hazy outlines
The only thing that's clear is you.

Taking risks and letting you in
Is all a part of this crazy game
Asking myself repetitive questions
Am I lovesick or am I insane?

My heart is aching once again
I'd forgotten what it's like to yearn
Though I told myself I'd take a break
I don't think I'll ever learn.

I think now you'll see me differently
I'm not the girl you thought I was then
Though I promised myself I wouldn't
I think I'm falling again.
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Post by superdork11 Fri 27 Aug 2010, 1:12 pm

Wow. O.o That's really good.
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 27 Aug 2010, 1:18 pm

I liked that. A lot. Great job with the rhyming.
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Post by Dreamer Fri 27 Aug 2010, 3:56 pm

Thanks to both of you. Smiley
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Post by superdork11 Sat 28 Aug 2010, 10:48 am

'S'welcome.
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