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Post by Tolly12bells on Thu 02 Dec 2010, 8:48 pm

Stinging liquid drips down my sides,
Burning me, forming a mushy blob at my feet.
Melted on my insides,
It scalds me with it’s sickening tremble.
Flames rush through me,
Coursing through my veins,
Impaling me, and unveiling my deepest secrets
A hot ashy smoke rises from my mouth,
Causing the sky above me to look like a volcanic eruption
I gasp, choke, sputter, but it only makes it worse
There’s pain like a wolf digging out through my heart
That has become soft and squishy in this melting process.
The flame singes the string leading to my destruction,
And my melted skin refuses to subside it’s unwavering flow.
The fire reaches my puddle of flesh,
And dies.

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Post by summer on Sun 05 Dec 2010, 2:08 pm

That's a great poem.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 05 Dec 2010, 4:11 pm

Thanks, Summer. Smiley

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 05 Dec 2010, 9:20 pm

It is amazing.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 9:05 am

Thanks, Eileen. xD You've already read this, though, so yeahh...

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Post by Dreamer on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 3:02 pm

I. Freaking. Love. That.

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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 7:15 pm

Thanks. Smiley It's sorta dark...

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Post by PeggySnow on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 9:14 pm

It is, but it's a beautiful poem. Nod

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Post by superdork11 on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 9:50 pm

It is.
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Post by Tolly12bells on Mon 06 Dec 2010, 10:47 pm

Thank you. *dramatic bow*

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Post by superdork11 on Tue 07 Dec 2010, 8:12 am

You're welcome. *dramatic applause*
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