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We Are Siblings

Post by PeggySnow on Sat 05 Mar 2011, 9:33 pm

My cousin and I just recently got into a pretty big fight, so to say I'm sorry, I wrote him a poem. I haven't given it to him yet, so what do you guys think?

We fight, we argue,
we yell, we disagree.
Though on this, I know you'll agree;
we are siblings.

We insult, we bicker,
then we'll call each other names, and we snicker.
Though on this, I know you'll certainly agree;
we're siblings.

The world isn't perfect, and neither are we,
though I know on this, you'll surely agree:
we are siblings.

My mom, oh how she will tell me:
“As soon as he will say,
'Will you go over Saturday'?
You'll be the first to say yes, no matter what he may say!”

I shake my head, and laugh it off,
and say, “That's not *posh!”
But on the inside, I only say one thing,
that I will say again and again:
I know.

Why? Because although we fight,
and although we argue,
although we yell and we insult and bicker,
then we laugh it off, and snicker,
and although we're surely not perfect,
and we certainly disagree,
to this, you will agree:
We are siblings.

*I really don't say that. xD

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 3:07 pm

Aww. Smiley It's really sweet, and a very good poem.

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Post by PeggySnow on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 4:40 pm

Thanks! Smiley I've never really been into writing poetry, but since writing this, I've taken a liking to it.

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 4:48 pm

Yeah, that's really good. Impressed you managed to rhyme, I can't ever pull that off. Good job.
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Post by PeggySnow on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 5:56 pm

Thanks. Rhyming is usually really hard, but it seemed to come naturally...

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 6:37 pm

Well, that's good that it comes naturally.
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Post by PeggySnow on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 7:02 pm

Yeah... It's only at random times, though. Eye Roll

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Post by superdork11 on Sun 06 Mar 2011, 7:03 pm

Huh, that's strange.
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Post by summer on Mon 07 Mar 2011, 2:51 pm

That was great. Nod Cute Clapping
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Re: We Are Siblings

Post by PeggySnow on Mon 07 Mar 2011, 4:53 pm

Yes, it is.

Thanks, summer! Smiley

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