We Are Siblings
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We Are Siblings
by PeggySnow Sat 05 Mar 2011, 9:33 pm
My cousin and I just recently got into a pretty big fight, so to say I'm sorry, I wrote him a poem. I haven't given it to him yet, so what do you guys think?
We fight, we argue,
we yell, we disagree.
Though on this, I know you'll agree;
we are siblings.
We insult, we bicker,
then we'll call each other names, and we snicker.
Though on this, I know you'll certainly agree;
we're siblings.
The world isn't perfect, and neither are we,
though I know on this, you'll surely agree:
we are siblings.
My mom, oh how she will tell me:
“As soon as he will say,
'Will you go over Saturday'?
You'll be the first to say yes, no matter what he may say!”
I shake my head, and laugh it off,
and say, “That's not *posh!”
But on the inside, I only say one thing,
that I will say again and again:
I know.
Why? Because although we fight,
and although we argue,
although we yell and we insult and bicker,
then we laugh it off, and snicker,
and although we're surely not perfect,
and we certainly disagree,
to this, you will agree:
*I really don't say that. xD
We fight, we argue,
we yell, we disagree.
Though on this, I know you'll agree;
we are siblings.
We insult, we bicker,
then we'll call each other names, and we snicker.
Though on this, I know you'll certainly agree;
we're siblings.
The world isn't perfect, and neither are we,
though I know on this, you'll surely agree:
we are siblings.
My mom, oh how she will tell me:
“As soon as he will say,
'Will you go over Saturday'?
You'll be the first to say yes, no matter what he may say!”
I shake my head, and laugh it off,
and say, “That's not *posh!”
But on the inside, I only say one thing,
that I will say again and again:
I know.
Why? Because although we fight,
and although we argue,
although we yell and we insult and bicker,
then we laugh it off, and snicker,
and although we're surely not perfect,
and we certainly disagree,
to this, you will agree:
*I really don't say that. xD
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Re: We Are Siblings
by Tolly12bells Sun 06 Mar 2011, 3:07 pm
Aww. 
It's really sweet, and a very good poem.
It's really sweet, and a very good poem.
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Re: We Are Siblings
by PeggySnow Sun 06 Mar 2011, 4:40 pm
Thanks! I've never really been into writing poetry, but since writing this, I've taken a liking to it.
I've never really been into writing poetry, but since writing this, I've taken a liking to it.
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Re: We Are Siblings
by superdork11 Sun 06 Mar 2011, 4:48 pm
Yeah, that's really good. Impressed you managed to rhyme, I can't ever pull that off. Good job.
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Re: We Are Siblings
by PeggySnow Sun 06 Mar 2011, 5:56 pm
Thanks. Rhyming is usually really hard, but it seemed to come naturally...
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Re: We Are Siblings
by superdork11 Sun 06 Mar 2011, 6:37 pm
Well, that's good that it comes naturally.
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