I Hear Feet Approaching
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I Hear Feet Approaching
I hear feet approaching,
On this gravel path,
I'll have to think real quickly,
I'll have to do the math.
If I start to run,
How fast will it be?
If I start to run,
Could it still catch me?
I take a chance,
I start to run,
It's faster than I thought,
I took a chance,
But now it's done,
It's over and I'm caught.
I would love some C+C :]
On this gravel path,
I'll have to think real quickly,
I'll have to do the math.
If I start to run,
How fast will it be?
If I start to run,
Could it still catch me?
I take a chance,
I start to run,
It's faster than I thought,
I took a chance,
But now it's done,
It's over and I'm caught.
I would love some C+C :]
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Re: I Hear Feet Approaching
Oh wow. I like that, and now I'm a little bit paranoid. O.o Very good though.
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Wow, that's really good! I wouldn't be able to think of rhymes likes that. *applause*
Re: I Hear Feet Approaching
I agree. It's like you're a mini Shakespeare. O.o I'm jealous. xD
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yeah! You are really good! Yeha!!!!!!!!!! Sorry, typo! Lol, bob! Yeah! good! sorry, spazz!
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Re: I Hear Feet Approaching
Thank you very much!
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