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Post by Dreamer Mon 22 Nov 2010, 3:25 pm

Sucked in
Frozen
Melted down and molded
Into a shape
The world said she should be.

Lured in
Fired
Glazed with petty lies and
Hung up on a wall
For all to see.

Cracking
Fading
Painting on a smile
Oh, what a superficial world
This world can be.
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 22 Nov 2010, 8:48 pm

... Whoa... Deepness alert. That was really good, though. Great metaphor.
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Post by Music Is Love Thu 25 Nov 2010, 5:37 pm

Again, Nadine writes an amazingly deep, wonderful poem! (:
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Post by Dreamer Thu 25 Nov 2010, 8:16 pm

Thank you! =) I wrote it in English without really paying attention and then I read it and I was like ".....whoa." xD
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Post by superdork11 Fri 26 Nov 2010, 10:39 am

Whoa, that was really good. How do you write like that?
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Post by Dreamer Fri 26 Nov 2010, 7:11 pm

Thank you? Like what? My style of writing, or writing absentmindedly?
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Post by superdork11 Sat 27 Nov 2010, 9:43 am

Your style of writing, 'cause, mostly, stuff just doesn't work for me....
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 27 Nov 2010, 12:48 pm

Eileen, bad. Self-degrading again. The only thing you sometimes fail at is finishing what you started, and poetry about cheese.
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Post by superdork11 Sat 27 Nov 2010, 2:19 pm

Hey! That was at midnight, okay. It wasn't my fault, I wasn't aware that I'd done that until morning.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 27 Nov 2010, 8:20 pm

What Lauren said. Except I don't know about the cheese part. But thank you.
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Post by superdork11 Sun 28 Nov 2010, 9:25 am

Okay. xD Around midnight one night I got up and wrote a poem about cheese. The next morning, when I read it, it majorly failed.
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 28 Nov 2010, 1:50 pm

LOL, it was so awesome! OMG, Eileen! Do you remember our sonnet rap about socks last year?
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Post by superdork11 Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:20 am

Ohmigod! Yes! Ode to Socks. How could I forget?! xDD
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:50 am

Yes! xD I don't remember the words, but we should post it. Do you still have it?
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Post by superdork11 Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:51 am

Yeah, I do! I'll shaare it with you on GoogleDocs.
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:54 am

You do that.
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Post by superdork11 Mon 29 Nov 2010, 8:55 am

Okay, I will.
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Post by Dreamer Mon 29 Nov 2010, 2:24 pm

... oh dear. xD
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Post by PeggySnow Mon 29 Nov 2010, 6:25 pm

....Hmm. Great poem, by the way! As Lauren said, the metaphor is pretty good, and I like it. Nod
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Post by superdork11 Tue 30 Nov 2010, 8:14 am

Now, we need to post it. It's ridiculous, but funny.
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Post by Tolly12bells Tue 30 Nov 2010, 8:54 am

YOU are welcome to do that. xD
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Post by superdork11 Wed 01 Dec 2010, 8:14 am

Okay, I willl.
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