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Post by Music Is Love Tue 21 Dec 2010, 11:17 pm

This little poem just came out of no where.

A stab, a scream
She falls to the floor
Blood flows out
She crawls to the door

A kick, a yell
She scrunches up tight
She can't stop the pain
Try as she might

A break, a snap
She stifles her cry
Desperately, she yells,
"I don't want to die!"

A push, a slam
She crumbles at his feet
There's no more strength
All she can do is weep

A shot, a last breath
She lies on the floor
Body battered and broken
She is nothing; no more
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Post by superdork11 Wed 22 Dec 2010, 10:14 am

Wow. o.O That was really good.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 22 Dec 2010, 12:56 pm

Whoa. Excellent rhyming, and a great poem... That's so sad, though...
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Post by Mercury Wed 22 Dec 2010, 3:27 pm

O_O This just makes me waterfall T-T sooo good and sooo sad!
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Post by PeggySnow Wed 22 Dec 2010, 6:00 pm

Wow... I love it. Everything just flows together.... Sad, but excellent.
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Post by superdork11 Thu 23 Dec 2010, 9:19 am

It's amazing, but really sad.
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Post by OOPSiSLIPPED Tue 11 Jan 2011, 4:45 pm

I agree with what everyone has said.

Nicely done! Cute Clapping
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