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Post by superdork11 Sun 16 Jan 2011, 1:20 pm

Mirror

We can never see our own face.
We look in a mirror,
Even that’s clogged with the thoughts
And inputs of others.
What we see in the mirror
Is a reflection of what society
Wants us to be.
I don’t want to fit into that mold.
I want to see myself as I am,
Not through the curtain of
“Civilization.”
Our image of being civilized,
Technology, modernization.
What makes us so different, really?
A small house in a small town
In the middle of no where,
No sheet between it and the stars.
That’s what civilization should be.
No layer of lies, expectations.
See yourself reflected back
As you really are.
That’s what I want.
A world were I can look in the mirror
And see me.
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Post by summer Sun 16 Jan 2011, 3:41 pm

Thats great how did you get an idea for that one?
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Post by Dreamer Sun 16 Jan 2011, 6:01 pm

Very true and nicely written, Eileen. *applause* Brava.
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 16 Jan 2011, 7:37 pm

Nice, Elieen! Very well written. Nod *Joins in applause*
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Post by superdork11 Mon 17 Jan 2011, 10:06 am

Thanks. I don't know, it's another poem I wrote at midnight. I'm just glad this one wasn't about cheese. xD
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Post by summer Mon 17 Jan 2011, 2:41 pm

I usually have to think hard about stuff that fits right into the poem thats why i try loads of words that i think would sound great.
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 17 Jan 2011, 6:51 pm

Ahh... I read this a couple days ago... Good the second and third time as well.
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Post by superdork11 Tue 18 Jan 2011, 8:14 am

Yeah, that's why I don't rhyme, it takes too much effort.
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