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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 11 Mar 2011, 11:54 pm

Yoflam, people. It's been forever since I've actually posted something that relates to writing. Eye Roll So I started a new book, and I was thinking about not posting it so it miiiiiight just get published, but, I decided against it. xD

This is just that little blurb that would be on the back of the book. I'll post the first chapter when I feel like I actually know where it's headed...

It was yet another ordinary day.
Just another ordinary day in three 15-year-olds’ ordinary lives.
If they had known it might be their last day in this world, maybe they would have acted differently.
Had they known that they were about to be zapped -- abducted -- into a different dimension, maybe Matt wouldn’t have cried over failing that test, and Jackson would have said goodbye to his mom rather than the gaggle of girls outside school, and Zach might have tried for some sort of social interaction.
Just perhaps, they would have acted out of the ordinary if they had known.
Maybe it would have saved them.

Chapter 1: Down, Down, Down
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Chapter 2: City Lights and Inky Ponds

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Chapter 3: The Backstory

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Chapter 4: Scarabs

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Chapter 5: Rules
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 13 Mar 2011, 11:19 am

Ooh, very interesting! I'm eager for more. Nod
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 13 Mar 2011, 12:50 pm

Thanks, Peggy. Smiley

I'm not updating yet, because I still can't get the first chapter how I want it to be... It's short, and kind of choppy... I'm frustrating myself...
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Post by superdork11 Sun 13 Mar 2011, 6:18 pm

Ah, I see. Yes, I want to see more.

Is it a cooincidence the names? xD
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 13 Mar 2011, 6:22 pm

Haha, I have all through chapter 2 written, but I'm not satisfied with it yet, so, no.

Yeah, it is. xD I started this before you liked Matt. Eye Roll
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Post by superdork11 Sun 13 Mar 2011, 6:59 pm

Ahah, okay then.

Okay.
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 13 Mar 2011, 7:36 pm

Yesh... I'm bugging myself. Maybe I'll work on it later tonight...
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Post by superdork11 Sun 13 Mar 2011, 7:39 pm

Okay, fair enough.
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Post by Tolly12bells Tue 15 Mar 2011, 10:36 pm

Heh, okay. Update, peeps. Sorry it's so short. I'm still not satisfied with this, but, it gets better. xD Bear with me for this one.
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Post by superdork11 Wed 16 Mar 2011, 8:24 am

Okay. OOh, good. Very descriptive.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 16 Mar 2011, 9:09 am

Really? xD Well, thanks. Smiley
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Post by superdork11 Wed 16 Mar 2011, 6:38 pm

Heh, it was good.
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 21 Mar 2011, 10:27 pm

MUWAHAHAHA. Chapter 2 is up, everybody. Smiley
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Post by superdork11 Tue 22 Mar 2011, 10:10 am

Oooh, *reads* Good!!!
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Post by Tolly12bells Tue 22 Mar 2011, 1:15 pm

Thank yous! Silly
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Post by superdork11 Wed 23 Mar 2011, 10:00 am

Fun fun fun.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 23 Mar 2011, 11:57 am

Well, that was a random post... xD
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Post by superdork11 Wed 23 Mar 2011, 7:33 pm

It was, I'm sorry.
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Post by Tolly12bells Thu 21 Apr 2011, 9:19 pm

Heh, sorry, it's been like, a month since I posted... I got all caught up in not procrastinating in school, and trying to balance life with everything else, that I haven't had much time... Update! And sorry about the name, Nadine. xD It was the only one coming to mind.
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Post by superdork11 Thu 21 Apr 2011, 10:48 pm

Yay! More! *Goes off to read*
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Post by Tolly12bells Thu 05 May 2011, 10:09 pm

Hey, guys, happy update time. Smiley I wrote like, four pages last night, so you get a nice long chapter... xD
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Post by superdork11 Fri 06 May 2011, 8:27 am

Ah, yes. *Nods* The bug thing is creepy...
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 06 May 2011, 9:06 pm

I know... It's so rare that I get to write creepy things, so I like to take advantage. Eye Roll
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Post by superdork11 Fri 06 May 2011, 9:10 pm

It's... Interesting to read this from you. xD
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 06 May 2011, 9:17 pm

This is pretty... me. xD This is the sort of thing that makes me happy. Eye Roll
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