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Post by Dreamer Thu 02 Sep 2010, 11:07 pm

Cute Clapping
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Post by superdork11 Fri 03 Sep 2010, 8:17 am

NIce... Now I'm trying to figure out what word you were going to use.
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 03 Sep 2010, 9:11 am

I know... I still can't remember. It means like, in the dark. I've left you in ____ for long enough...
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Post by Dreamer Fri 03 Sep 2010, 12:44 pm

Oh.. it's on the tip of my tongue... Razz <-- do you see it there?
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 03 Sep 2010, 8:51 pm

Nope... I still can't remember. UGH.
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Post by superdork11 Sat 04 Sep 2010, 9:46 am

Suspense? Maybe?
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 04 Sep 2010, 11:58 am

... No, I don't think so... I was thinking that was maybe it, but no... When I went to type it, I accidentally typed the word conspicuous on accident, then I forgot what word I actually meant...
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Post by superdork11 Sat 04 Sep 2010, 4:45 pm

Okay then. Hm...
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 26 Sep 2010, 10:42 pm

Yay! Guess who sorta kinda forgot this story existed?! Mee!!! YAY! xD But anyway, update on post 16. The chapters are quite a bit shorter from here on out, because I got an inspiration and ran with it, and there's a lot more going on, so I'll probably post an entire chapter in an update. But here is a short, although very eventful chapter.
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Post by superdork11 Mon 27 Sep 2010, 8:29 am

Oh man, I'd kinda forgotten about this story too! Wow. It's been a long time.
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 27 Sep 2010, 9:00 am

Well, actually, it hasn't even been a month. But I was so distracted. xD
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Post by superdork11 Tue 28 Sep 2010, 8:33 am

Well, I guess it just felt like a long time.
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Post by Tolly12bells Tue 26 Oct 2010, 8:05 pm

Yup, I've kept you all waiting for about a month now, so, update on post 16. Sorry about the painfully short chapter, and the cliffhanger. The story is almost over, though. Smug
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Post by Dreamer Tue 26 Oct 2010, 10:17 pm

OH MY FRICKING GOSHHH. *flips out*
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Post by superdork11 Wed 27 Oct 2010, 8:16 am

Well, that was a spazz.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 27 Oct 2010, 6:55 pm

Soo.... Nadine... You, er, like it? xD
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Post by Dreamer Wed 27 Oct 2010, 9:13 pm

xD Yes. I missed the chapter before that, too, so it was even more of a spazz moment.
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 27 Oct 2010, 9:54 pm

Oh, snap! Yeah, the one before is probably the second most intense chapter in the book. I believe it's the next that's the craziest. And I'm back to editing this thing again. It's pretty choppy, and this is just the rough ROUGH draft. It's being worked on currently. Nod
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Post by superdork11 Thu 28 Oct 2010, 8:17 am

Yeah, it's a taad choppy, but good. Nod
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Post by Tolly12bells Thu 28 Oct 2010, 9:03 am

I'm definitely going to put some transition scenes in, and reword a lot of stuff... It's definitely a WIP.
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Post by superdork11 Fri 29 Oct 2010, 8:15 am

Yeah, I think it'll get that much better.
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Post by Dreamer Fri 29 Oct 2010, 5:28 pm

I really think you should publish this, legit. Work on it some more, definitely.
I plan on being an editor/writer as my career, so if you need someone to edit, I'd be thrilled. I have natural editing abilities. Nod
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 29 Oct 2010, 6:40 pm

Lol, I'm working on it right now, but I could absolutely use somebody to edit it. Eye Roll I'm going through and fixing up the choppy stuff, but I definitely use some suggestions. Smiley The one thing you won't have to worry about is spelling. xD
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Post by Dreamer Mon 01 Nov 2010, 2:52 pm

Alright, cool. Nod Should I just go from the version on here, or you could email me a revised version.
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 01 Nov 2010, 6:45 pm

Well, it's still completely in the process right now, and I'm not quite ready for somebody else to edit, because I'm going to be adding things, deleting things, putting in transition scenes. Then, once I've got all that part out, I'll put it all up here in the first few posts, and then you can go from there. Wink Nothing right now, though. I will post the next scene however, because I hate to leave you with a cliffhanger. I believe there are like, 2 more chapters.

CORRECTION! I just posted it all. Smiley All finished. Because I didn't want to leave you with yet another short chapter. xD
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