The Shadow Wolf
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Re: The Shadow Wolf
NIce... Now I'm trying to figure out what word you were going to use.
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I know... I still can't remember. It means like, in the dark. I've left you in ____ for long enough...
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Nope... I still can't remember. UGH.
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Suspense? Maybe?
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... No, I don't think so... I was thinking that was maybe it, but no... When I went to type it, I accidentally typed the word conspicuous on accident, then I forgot what word I actually meant...
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Okay then. Hm...
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Yay! Guess who sorta kinda forgot this story existed?! Mee!!! YAY! xD But anyway, update on post 16. The chapters are quite a bit shorter from here on out, because I got an inspiration and ran with it, and there's a lot more going on, so I'll probably post an entire chapter in an update. But here is a short, although very eventful chapter.
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Oh man, I'd kinda forgotten about this story too! Wow. It's been a long time.
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Well, actually, it hasn't even been a month. But I was so distracted. xD
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Well, I guess it just felt like a long time.
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Yup, I've kept you all waiting for about a month now, so, update on post 16. Sorry about the painfully short chapter, and the cliffhanger. The story is almost over, though.
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Well, that was a spazz.
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Soo.... Nadine... You, er, like it? xD
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xD Yes. I missed the chapter before that, too, so it was even more of a spazz moment.
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Oh, snap! Yeah, the one before is probably the second most intense chapter in the book. I believe it's the next that's the craziest. And I'm back to editing this thing again. It's pretty choppy, and this is just the rough ROUGH draft. It's being worked on currently.
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Yeah, it's a taad choppy, but good.
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I'm definitely going to put some transition scenes in, and reword a lot of stuff... It's definitely a WIP.
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Yeah, I think it'll get that much better.
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I really think you should publish this, legit. Work on it some more, definitely.
I plan on being an editor/writer as my career, so if you need someone to edit, I'd be thrilled. I have natural editing abilities.
I plan on being an editor/writer as my career, so if you need someone to edit, I'd be thrilled. I have natural editing abilities.
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Lol, I'm working on it right now, but I could absolutely use somebody to edit it. I'm going through and fixing up the choppy stuff, but I definitely use some suggestions. The one thing you won't have to worry about is spelling. xD
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Alright, cool. Should I just go from the version on here, or you could email me a revised version.
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Well, it's still completely in the process right now, and I'm not quite ready for somebody else to edit, because I'm going to be adding things, deleting things, putting in transition scenes. Then, once I've got all that part out, I'll put it all up here in the first few posts, and then you can go from there. Nothing right now, though. I will post the next scene however, because I hate to leave you with a cliffhanger. I believe there are like, 2 more chapters.
CORRECTION! I just posted it all. All finished. Because I didn't want to leave you with yet another short chapter. xD
CORRECTION! I just posted it all. All finished. Because I didn't want to leave you with yet another short chapter. xD
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