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Post by Dreamer on Wed 04 Aug 2010, 7:42 pm

Trapped

Breaths come short
Agony
Tears spill out
trail down my cheeks

Constricting
like indestructible hands
Crushing
In heartless tightening bands

Struggling
Gasping for air
Trying to escape
But there’s nothing there

Tears wash
the colors to gray
Despair swoops in
and shadows the day

My heart is racing
Pounding in my ears
The world is spinning
Starting to disappear

Finally realizing,
I stop kicking
Stop fighting
Stop pushing it away

There’s no use
There’s no point
There’s no way out.

This world begins to collapse.
Underneath the rubble,
I’m trapped.


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Post by Music Is Love on Wed 04 Aug 2010, 8:25 pm

Beautiful as always, Nadine. Smile
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Post by OOPSiSLIPPED on Wed 04 Aug 2010, 10:13 pm

I love this poem of yours, Nadine!! The way you describe everything is so spot on, in my opinion. Smiley


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Post by Dreamer on Thu 05 Aug 2010, 8:43 am

Thank you, both of you! Smiley

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Post by summer on Thu 05 Aug 2010, 12:20 pm

yeah that really good.
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Post by Dreamer on Thu 05 Aug 2010, 6:25 pm

Thank you. Smiley

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Post by Tolly12bells on Sat 07 Aug 2010, 8:55 pm

I liked that. Smiley It wasn't a happy poem, but deep, as always! And Kaitie, whenever you log in, I dedicated a roller coaster to you. xD Thought you ought to know.

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Post by Dreamer on Sat 07 Aug 2010, 8:58 pm

Thanks! I wrote it about a year ago, discovered it the other day, and posted it.

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 19 Aug 2010, 9:16 am

Wow. Nadine, that was amazing.
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Post by Dreamer on Thu 19 Aug 2010, 9:18 am

Thanks (:

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Post by superdork11 on Thu 19 Aug 2010, 9:20 am

Your welcome.
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